Torn Angel

We must be kind to people. Enough negative folks in this world.

Torn Angel

My  broken Angel.
Please smile for me.
Stay with me at the sea all night.


Your world has fallen apart.
You don't know right from wrong.
Desperate acts had left you feeling
dirty and insulated from everyone.


Please take my hand.

Walk with a man who swims in s**t most
of his life.


There's no angels on this Earth.
Only us struggling to make amends.


We all must do things we are ashamed of.
The world isn't clean anymore.
Not enough helping hands.


There is no pity for the people in plight today.
I know we get fatigue and humiliated to
believing we are worthless and destitute.


My wounded Angel.
Please take my hand.
Walk with a contaminated man.
Jaded kisses and broken promises had
left me empty.
The not so sweet taste of life has turn me bitter.


Sad Angel whispered.
"I'm a dumping ground for men
who want to use and abuse.
I don't mean much to no-one."


I  touched her face.
I told her.
We must ascend from the malingering hell.
Leave the one's who want you  begging for mercy.
In a shadow of our memories.


There is  no easy road.
Sometime we must get up.
Tell the world to back away.


Find a better path to be on.
Kinder people.


Torn Angel walk with me.
Take my hand.
The new day is rising from the East.




           Coyote
            Oct 2009

Author's Note

Sometime we need friendship to make us stronger. Kind words and people who don't look for weaknesses. Thank you for reading. Any errors. Please assist a old man.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

From the beginning to the end, this inspired me... We have times when we feel worthless, and when someone is there to hold our hand it helps ease the pain...the walk of life is so much better when we have someone kind enough to show they care. Lovely write!

[Stacey Watts]

This was another very well written poem from you. I think you are absolutely right. We all need the friendship or companionship to live in the cruel hard world. Excellent work.

[Angelic Surrender]

Touching

[Kes]

This is so beautiful. I especially loved the lines:

"My wounded Angel.
Please take my hand.
Walk with a contaminated man."

I thought those lines were phenomonal.
Great write.
K

[Allen Smuckler]

You know Coyote, I was tempted to make note or correct some of the "imperfections" of this marvelous write...but by the time I finished reading it...I felt they not only should stay but actually added to the raw emotion and passion of the write and enhanced the feelings of angst and despair, as they quietly turned to inspiration and hope.
A great write coyote
allen

[Octob3r Star]

Passionate and thought provoking. Great job!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is beautiful :) and I agree friendship does make us stronger, well for me it does. On the times I feel worthless or not listened to, there are those people that are there!:) Those are the ones I thank God for.
Great job once again...like always. Keep it up :)


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[To be scene To be heard..]

this poem is beyond spectacular the ways of our new world and the way mankind treat fair and good people is just horrible. this poem is your best work

[?]

You are so right Coyote...we all need a kind...helping...supportive hand sometimes...seems as if there is not enough in the world anymore...hands and hearts have grown weak and cold...well done ... Thanks for sharing this wonderful message

[Ed Hart]

thank you for sharing, one old man to another