Torn Angel

We must be kind to people. Enough negative folks in this world.

Torn Angel

My  broken Angel.
Please smile for me.
Stay with me at the sea all night.


Your world has fallen apart.
You don't know right from wrong.
Desperate acts had left you feeling
dirty and insulated from everyone.


Please take my hand.

Walk with a man who swims in s**t most
of his life.


There's no angels on this Earth.
Only us struggling to make amends.


We all must do things we are ashamed of.
The world isn't clean anymore.
Not enough helping hands.


There is no pity for the people in plight today.
I know we get fatigue and humiliated to
believing we are worthless and destitute.


My wounded Angel.
Please take my hand.
Walk with a contaminated man.
Jaded kisses and broken promises had
left me empty.
The not so sweet taste of life has turn me bitter.


Sad Angel whispered.
"I'm a dumping ground for men
who want to use and abuse.
I don't mean much to no-one."


I  touched her face.
I told her.
We must ascend from the malingering hell.
Leave the one's who want you  begging for mercy.
In a shadow of our memories.


There is  no easy road.
Sometime we must get up.
Tell the world to back away.


Find a better path to be on.
Kinder people.


Torn Angel walk with me.
Take my hand.
The new day is rising from the East.




           Coyote
            Oct 2009

Author's Note

Sometime we need friendship to make us stronger. Kind words and people who don't look for weaknesses. Thank you for reading. Any errors. Please assist a old man.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

From the beginning to the end, this inspired me... We have times when we feel worthless, and when someone is there to hold our hand it helps ease the pain...the walk of life is so much better when we have someone kind enough to show they care. Lovely write!

[Star Wolf]

A very moving and a very human piece. Kind words can and do go a long way.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Excellent piece. So many people are raised to feel this way, worthless, or they have to do something drastic to survive and end up feeling this way because of this. I really do enjoy reading your writes!

[reflectingus]

So true, every word has a beautiful, witty meaning. It brings out the beauty of imperfection, how our worlds may be messed up, but friendship and love certainly isn't. I freakin love your language, I found myself hooked on till the end. Beautiful poetry, as always, need I say more?
"My wounded Angel.
Please take my hand.
Walk with a contaminated man."

[R.A. Youngblood]

This really inspires me! Yea, friends is the most important thing in our life.
This is kinda deep and emotional, emptiness flows in it!
I specially like the ending..
Thanks for sharing..Well done :D

[Kuhr Gred]

this is true.. that's why i love my friends :) thanks for sharing a wonderful and inspirational poem :)
- Kuhr Gred

[CHRIS ANDES]

..your words are real good to ponder upon
thanks for sharing =]

[Tsukin Archangel]

ok i loved the message, just a few lines i thought could have been phrased a little better to make it flow more evenly like "Your world has fell apart." could be changed to "Your world has fallen apart" which is more grammatically correct and just has a more graceful tone to it, and like "Walk with a man who swims in s**t most of his life" the way that line is broken into two ruins the flow, so i'd suggest putting that all on one line or changing it to fit on one line like "Walk with a man who swims in s**t the most" or something. Anyway, just a few things i noticed that i think could use some improvement, but like i said before I loved this poem, it was a good read and the message was very profound, Great job and keep writing :3

[Suditi]

A very deep, touching poem.
It is true. Sometimes, all we need is a friend, who can hold our hand, who can walk with us, knowing that we are not perfect.
It is a beautiful poem.

[smkb90]

This poem was very touching, I could feel your emotions with the words you used, the despair, the frustration, the sadness, the emptiness but the underlying hope was what made the poem. In every moment of despair and darkness there's always the hope of light even if at that moment you can't see it.
"Ain't no angels on this Earth.
Only us struggling to make amends."
How I wish this wasn't so.
Thanks for the inspiring and sobering poem, it is perfect.