Torn Angel

We must be kind to people. Enough negative folks in this world.

Torn Angel

My  broken Angel.
Please smile for me.
Stay with me at the sea all night.


Your world has fallen apart.
You don't know right from wrong.
Desperate acts had left you feeling
dirty and insulated from everyone.


Please take my hand.

Walk with a man who swims in s**t most
of his life.


There's no angels on this Earth.
Only us struggling to make amends.


We all must do things we are ashamed of.
The world isn't clean anymore.
Not enough helping hands.


There is no pity for the people in plight today.
I know we get fatigue and humiliated to
believing we are worthless and destitute.


My wounded Angel.
Please take my hand.
Walk with a contaminated man.
Jaded kisses and broken promises had
left me empty.
The not so sweet taste of life has turn me bitter.


Sad Angel whispered.
"I'm a dumping ground for men
who want to use and abuse.
I don't mean much to no-one."


I  touched her face.
I told her.
We must ascend from the malingering hell.
Leave the one's who want you  begging for mercy.
In a shadow of our memories.


There is  no easy road.
Sometime we must get up.
Tell the world to back away.


Find a better path to be on.
Kinder people.


Torn Angel walk with me.
Take my hand.
The new day is rising from the East.




           Coyote
            Oct 2009

Author's Note

Sometime we need friendship to make us stronger. Kind words and people who don't look for weaknesses. Thank you for reading. Any errors. Please assist a old man.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

From the beginning to the end, this inspired me... We have times when we feel worthless, and when someone is there to hold our hand it helps ease the pain...the walk of life is so much better when we have someone kind enough to show they care. Lovely write!

[Enigma]

Yes, that is true. We all go through own own little hell, time to time, and all we need is a kind soul to help us get through. And sometimes, we have to exchange the roles. I love the uplifting feeling and a sense of hope your poem gives. Beautifully penned. :)

[Cass]

I love this completely, you are a very talented writer.

[Allison]

One word: Inspirational. Okay, two: Amazing. Love it!!

[HulyaY]

In its depiction of your emotional state and honesty, a remarkable poem.

Ah but how do you tell the world to back away....I would love to know.
Wish there was a button for that. But really this is a strong piece.

[Junger]

This is just a perfect strong and amazing poem i like this

[nicolettox]

beautiful. written from the heart and the memory and experience.
I guess the main difference between angels and humans may be that the latter forget that they too were made to be pure and beautiful and loved.
thank you, it's a great poem.

[Rene Velez]

inspiring and uplifting thoughts, that are a sign of your writings, Coyote always a pleasure reading you, thanks...

[Leslie Philibert]

Thought there are some great lines, swim in s**t, dumping ground for men., strong modern poetry, like the imagery and the theme, good writing.

[unshakenScene]

this is amazing:D thats all i have to say