Torn Angel

We must be kind to people. Enough negative folks in this world.

Torn Angel

My  broken Angel.
Please smile for me.
Stay with me at the sea all night.


Your world has fallen apart.
You don't know right from wrong.
Desperate acts had left you feeling
dirty and insulated from everyone.


Please take my hand.

Walk with a man who swims in s**t most
of his life.


There's no angels on this Earth.
Only us struggling to make amends.


We all must do things we are ashamed of.
The world isn't clean anymore.
Not enough helping hands.


There is no pity for the people in plight today.
I know we get fatigue and humiliated to
believing we are worthless and destitute.


My wounded Angel.
Please take my hand.
Walk with a contaminated man.
Jaded kisses and broken promises had
left me empty.
The not so sweet taste of life has turn me bitter.


Sad Angel whispered.
"I'm a dumping ground for men
who want to use and abuse.
I don't mean much to no-one."


I  touched her face.
I told her.
We must ascend from the malingering hell.
Leave the one's who want you  begging for mercy.
In a shadow of our memories.


There is  no easy road.
Sometime we must get up.
Tell the world to back away.


Find a better path to be on.
Kinder people.


Torn Angel walk with me.
Take my hand.
The new day is rising from the East.




           Coyote
            Oct 2009

Author's Note

Sometime we need friendship to make us stronger. Kind words and people who don't look for weaknesses. Thank you for reading. Any errors. Please assist a old man.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

From the beginning to the end, this inspired me... We have times when we feel worthless, and when someone is there to hold our hand it helps ease the pain...the walk of life is so much better when we have someone kind enough to show they care. Lovely write!

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Loved it, it's an interesting story, full of meaning and deep truth we usually don't like to face, thank you for this amazing poem :)

[Eric Cox]

Love, compassion and caring can help heal people wounded by life. An excellent write and creative pen on this.

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he sentiment of kindness is healing and you capture it well in your work here coyote.
Very sweet :)

[Barbara Walker]

You offer a redemptive friendship! So many people out to hurt others, when kindness is what we all need. So many want to point fingers, in this way elevating themselves in their own mind, yet, but for any number of reasons, go them! Good write!

[Humor Me]

Nicely Written

[Nona]

I like the reverse upside-down logic of the poetic reality here! Paradox of the situation in which a human helps an angel that what interests me the most here! it is a beautiful poem and the story is engaging!

[K-mo]

this is a wonderful poem, makes me smile to see such beautiful work!

[Dean Kuch®]

Haunting and sentimentally stunning, what more can I say? Oh yes...breathtaking!

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

We all go through our phases of low esteem and disillusion from the world but the key lies in acceptance and moving on. Kindness and love can lead us through more easily. Written with much compassion and gentleness of heart.

[Lily Mae]

Your love and friendships are so treasured in your heart and I love it when you share them with us.. You truly are an amazing man..xo