Torn Angel

We must be kind to people. Enough negative folks in this world.

Torn Angel

My  broken Angel.
Please smile for me.
Stay with me at the sea all night.


Your world has fallen apart.
You don't know right from wrong.
Desperate acts had left you feeling
dirty and insulated from everyone.


Please take my hand.

Walk with a man who swims in s**t most
of his life.


There's no angels on this Earth.
Only us struggling to make amends.


We all must do things we are ashamed of.
The world isn't clean anymore.
Not enough helping hands.


There is no pity for the people in plight today.
I know we get fatigue and humiliated to
believing we are worthless and destitute.


My wounded Angel.
Please take my hand.
Walk with a contaminated man.
Jaded kisses and broken promises had
left me empty.
The not so sweet taste of life has turn me bitter.


Sad Angel whispered.
"I'm a dumping ground for men
who want to use and abuse.
I don't mean much to no-one."


I  touched her face.
I told her.
We must ascend from the malingering hell.
Leave the one's who want you  begging for mercy.
In a shadow of our memories.


There is  no easy road.
Sometime we must get up.
Tell the world to back away.


Find a better path to be on.
Kinder people.


Torn Angel walk with me.
Take my hand.
The new day is rising from the East.




           Coyote
            Oct 2009

Author's Note

Sometime we need friendship to make us stronger. Kind words and people who don't look for weaknesses. Thank you for reading. Any errors. Please assist a old man.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

From the beginning to the end, this inspired me... We have times when we feel worthless, and when someone is there to hold our hand it helps ease the pain...the walk of life is so much better when we have someone kind enough to show they care. Lovely write!

[lei]

through hard times we need someone to help us get through it.... beautiful write!

[Tamelia Jade]

Really beautiful :) and amazing descriptions that made it really easy and enjoyable to read. The whole of idea of a 'broken' or 'torn' angel is lovely and you describe the realities of life amazingly!

[GunMetal]

I enjoy the way this reads. Your diction is quite rare. And your heart is powerful. I thoroughly enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!

[just is]

wow pretty powerful writing here, well written and expressed

[Liderien]

the support of a friend who has walked the same path is a kind of healing. I found this to be true in my own life. This is a great read. Thank you for sharing.

[Tasha]

You are absolutely right Coyote. This was a beautiful piece. Great write.