Secret love and hidden memory

Someone today told me. Write a new poem. Here it is.

                         











 


















Secret love and hidden memory.

I saw her face today.
Made me wander back in time.
Each of us hold our Beatrice's near.
The writer holds on to memories like a drunkard holds on to his wine.

Do our memories become less with time?
Do innocent kisses and embraces of youth become sweeter with age?

Do dreams of beautiful brown eyed young woman leave your thoughts
and you become empty?

Can you escape the dance of long sweet kisses and yearning to touch
tender and warm flesh?

Age allowed us to ponder old memories.
Make us wished we held tighter and done more.

Beautiful faces dance in my head.
Old thoughts forgotten.
Rebirth to make me remember I loved a brown eye girl once.

                                     Coyote
                                     May2012

Author's Note

Any mistakes. Please assist a old Poet.

Reviews

[Liderien]

there is an s on "dances" third line from the bottom. it should either be danced or dance.

The line under the picture could be shortened to fit the poem better.
instead of
""The writer holds on to memories like a drunk holds on to his wine"
The writers hold to memories like a drunkard to his wine.

That is all my friend. Thank you sharing. It brings me great joy to read your writings.

[MOON]

Memory , the road not taken. Some people we hold in our hearts forever. Poignant , lovely write.

[ROSALIND]

awesome poem such passion engulfed with such emotion well done

[Sunset Girl]

Very nice piece, and makes one wonder about those old memories too.

[KalliRose]

I love this :) very very nice

[Patrick]

I really enjoyed this piece coyote - the questions and thoughts placed together in heartfelt fashion makes it a moving tribute.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Some memories just seem to stay with us. We can only hope they aren't the dark tragic mistakes we have made in our lives. An amazing poem, I enjoyed reading this. It brings back some memories for me.

[Tina Kline]

A very tender and bittersweet poem. The longer we live the more memories there are to haunt us and make us regret. I really enjoyed reading your poem.

[Ash]

Love this poem!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

very romantic and a pleasant read

[Thea]

This was one beautiful work, Coyote...There's such power, passion, wisdom and strength within memories in this poem. I totally enjoyed reading this, Excellent work! Thanks for once again sharing a masterpiece.
:)))