Two poems

Many questions are raised if you listen. Don't be like the children in the old fairy tale following the pipe piper. Leading us to hell.

               







     







   The Violence Sea  
 
Anger erupt
The blind open their eyes.
 
Men on high horses.
Tells us more stories to blind us.
 
Entangled and enraged we try to see.
We can't see above the bullshit.
 
Rich men in big houses.
Tell us we are Ok and eating prime rib.
 
The bottom feeders eat beans and potatoes.
Wonder what the hell are we going to do?
 
                     Coyote
 
 
                          Forgiveness
 
The f-king blood drips from our flag.
Gun a-roaring attacking towns and villages.
 
The leaders tells us.
We are the saviors.
 
Saved a country.
Then we will rebuilt the country and make it better.
 
Israel attack neighbors.
World tell them to stop.
Stop the bombing and killing..
 
Like us. Being blessed give us the right to do what we please.
 
How can you forgive?
The Angel of death dropping bombs.
 
Killing woman and children.
Hate grow like cancer.
 
Peace and forgiveness are forgotten words.
 
                                 Coyote

Author's Note

I have great concern for this world. Freedom of speak need to be protected and men of peace must come. Before we pass a line in the sand where we cannot turn back from.

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

sometimes the 'fairy tale' is the only thing keeping me going, as well as, many others. Both powerful writes full of truth. How that truth hurts. Or is it lies upon lies that hurt; I'd say both. when does the bs end? only when all is destroyed for the betterment of what?

[Adalynn]

good write..

adalynn

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You write a poem with a great message, peace is not found, love is lost and hate is surviving! We need a peace filled world, but I believe that all we have to look farward to is Heaven where peace will survive!

[KAREN]

Your concerns are mine as well, the ending says it all.
Peace and forgiveness are forgotton words.
100/100

[?]

It is hard to imagine a world filled with love and no hate. Dont see that happening either. My opinion we need to find that peace within ourselves. Let every man workout their own
You have expressed your concerns so well here, so many of us have the same concerns.
Thanks Coyote

[Between the grey]

This write really makes one think, intriguing and interesting. Like this Coyote.

[Me]

Poetic imagination at its brilliant zenith...

[Poe Redd]

Your concern for the world is raw here, sincere and makes enjoyable reads. Love them!

[Gomer LePoet]

Hypocrits, liars, cheats and thugs have always ruled our world. I don't see that ever coming to an end, until the end. great messages Coyote.

[Thea]

"Peace and forgiveness are forgotten words."
I like the powerful ending in this poem...The words are well chosen every line and how the idea shows the readers its value is just flawless...Great work!
:)))