Sad brown eyes

Love should bring joy. Not sadness.

                    

   

  

Sad brown eyes

A brown eye angel is crying in our bedroom for me.

In a turmoil of a kind love.

A paradise of burning emotion.

You can create a strange prison.

I held her too tightly.

I didn't hold her enough.

The fine line of giving and taking leave you confused.

Love held on by a few words won't last the night.

I try to speak softly and don't create a wall of hate.

When life's disappointments surround you.

Slow down and think.

I close my eyes.

Re-set my thoughts.

Allow the pain to evaporate into the night.

I told her "I love you since the first moment I looked into your brown eyes.."

We sat  together in a silence and  I held  her tightly.

I whispered. "Stop the fear and hate before the walls of love falls down forever.

In a nightmare  you  didn't love me. I was alone"

I fell to my knees and prayed at her feet.

"My only wish.

Please don't leave my life."

I open my eyes and my brown eye Angel embraced me.

She told me. "You are my first real love.

When you leave me. I will never be complete again."

I whispered "I love you and I need you.

Your love made a man running in circles find peace."

Sweet dreams can become nightmares.

A wise man is gentle with his wife and children.

Love bring love. Kindness bring kindness.

Some words should never be spoken.

For words can break a heart forever.

I will go to my brown eye angel and beg for forgiveness.

      Coyote

     October 1994

 

Author's Note

Any mistakes. Please assist.

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

The only mistakes I could find are simple grammar errors. Such as where you wrote, "When you leave me. I will never be complete again" as two seperate sentences, when it should be one seperated by a comma, because "when you leave me" is a dependent clause.
As for the poem itself, I loved the simplicity of the words yet the very deep meaning behind them. The emotion is evident. Thank you.

[Stormy Weather]

This is beautifully sad, and I really enjoyed reading it.

[Arielle Ann]

"I held her too tightly.
I didn't hold her enough."- I can understand your repent in the above lines...this was another marvelous story ! can't help wondering how you can create so many facets of love!

[Sheila Kline]

I adore all of your story poems! They are words not to be forgotten, and to bring understanding and love to a heart. Again, your ability to relate your feelings to another is exceptional! The picture is also awesome! I don't consider mistakes as mistakes....I consider any, if they are there, as part of you Coyote, and the way you tell the story!
I never notice any, as I am so lost in your words of the heart!!

[Amila Jay]

Excellent:-)

[Bridget Murphy]

Great lessons!!!

[Tina Kline]

I felt the sadness in your words. A very powerful poem indeed. Wise words in it too. Love is fragile, it can be broken beyond repair. This is a really excellent poem, very real one too.

[Joiedevivre]

This is really moving and sad.. makes me think of a love inevitably lost, but which taught a lot.

[Kim's Poems]

My Goodness, this is a real heart tugger to me.
Pulled at my heart strings. So delicate written.
I enjoyed this.

[Paradoxical]

I love the emotion in this. It shows the reader the deep feelings that are embedded in your words. The ending really makes one think about about love and the things needed for love. Beautiful!