Sad brown eyes

Love should bring joy. Not sadness.

                    

   

  

Sad brown eyes

A brown eye angel is crying in our bedroom for me.

In a turmoil of a kind love.

A paradise of burning emotion.

You can create a strange prison.

I held her too tightly.

I didn't hold her enough.

The fine line of giving and taking leave you confused.

Love held on by a few words won't last the night.

I try to speak softly and don't create a wall of hate.

When life's disappointments surround you.

Slow down and think.

I close my eyes.

Re-set my thoughts.

Allow the pain to evaporate into the night.

I told her "I love you since the first moment I looked into your brown eyes.."

We sat  together in a silence and  I held  her tightly.

I whispered. "Stop the fear and hate before the walls of love falls down forever.

In a nightmare  you  didn't love me. I was alone"

I fell to my knees and prayed at her feet.

"My only wish.

Please don't leave my life."

I open my eyes and my brown eye Angel embraced me.

She told me. "You are my first real love.

When you leave me. I will never be complete again."

I whispered "I love you and I need you.

Your love made a man running in circles find peace."

Sweet dreams can become nightmares.

A wise man is gentle with his wife and children.

Love bring love. Kindness bring kindness.

Some words should never be spoken.

For words can break a heart forever.

I will go to my brown eye angel and beg for forgiveness.

      Coyote

     October 1994

 

Author's Note

Any mistakes. Please assist.

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

The only mistakes I could find are simple grammar errors. Such as where you wrote, "When you leave me. I will never be complete again" as two seperate sentences, when it should be one seperated by a comma, because "when you leave me" is a dependent clause.
As for the poem itself, I loved the simplicity of the words yet the very deep meaning behind them. The emotion is evident. Thank you.

[Thea]

Whenever I read your poems, the adage "Simplicity is the best" always comes in my mind...Simply because even though you have a simple style in poetry, the significance of the idea behind it is still seen...You've told another piece of amazing love once again...Excellent work...
:)))

[CHRIS ANDES]

that's so sweet of you...
...your poetry revealed its magnificence...

[Mo'Kha]

I have been reading your work for a while now and each time I'm amazed at how simplistic you make it appear. blessings ~M

[MandaBear]

well written

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful spoken.
A love poem of how much love can bring us all to our knees. Especially when we have found the one we could not bear to live without. love grows and with it there is always the fear of losing, for now it becomes a fact that there is so much to lose. Holding on can be the hardest thing but always remember, with love there is no me or you there is only the two combined as one to keep above all others. A lovely poem. Keep them coming.

[Aidz]

I had a rap tune playing in bground and yr words set nicely to it, would be kewl to here to music Coyote

[Awkward]

That's the beauty of a poem. You don't have to follow any rules or restrictions the language usually sets forth. Beautiful piece of art.

[N.A.S.S]

really well written

[BlueDreams]

Oh! Thats an amazing piece i ever glanced,invoking the feeling of romance .. so great write :-)