Sad brown eyes

Sad brown eyes

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Love should bring joy. Not sadness.

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Sad brown eyes



A brown eye angel is crying in our bedroom for me.


In a turmoil of a kind love.

A paradise of burning emotion.

You can create a strange prison.


I held her too tightly.

I didn't hold her enough.


The fine line of giving and taking leave you confused.


Love held on by a few words won't last the night.

I try to speak softly and don't create a wall of hate.


When life's disappointments surround you.

Slow down and think.


I close my eyes.

Re-set my thoughts.

Allow the pain to evaporate into the night.


I told her "I love you since the first moment I looked into your brown eyes.."

We sat  together in a silence and  I held  her tightly.


I whispered. "Stop the fear and hate before the walls of love falls down forever.

In a nightmare  you  didn't love me. I was alone"


I fell to my knees and prayed at her feet.

"My only wish.

Please don't leave my life."


I open my eyes and my brown eye Angel embraced me.

She told me. "You are my first real love.

When you leave me. I will never be complete again."


I whispered "I love you and I need you.

Your love made a man running in circles find peace."


Sweet dreams can become nightmares.


A wise man is gentle with his wife and children.


Love bring love. Kindness bring kindness.


Some words should never be spoken.


For words can break a heart forever.


I will go to my brown eye angel and beg for forgiveness.


      Coyote

     October 1994

 

© 2012 Coyote Poetry


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The only mistakes I could find are simple grammar errors. Such as where you wrote, "When you leave me. I will never be complete again" as two seperate sentences, when it should be one seperated by a comma, because "when you leave me" is a dependent clause.
As for the poem itself, I loved the simplicity of the words yet the very deep meaning behind them. The emotion is evident. Thank you.

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The woman in the picture is beautiful, but the way you describe her only does her justice. You have a beautiful soul. Always a pleasure to read what you have written!

~ Scandalous

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Lovely Piece

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nice work Coyote...each poem you write of love is filled with emotions that keep one within the character of the poem...nice

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Can't see any mistakes through my tears. Favorite lines, "Your love made a man running in circles find peace" and "A wise man is gentle with his wife and children" Absoulutely beautiful!

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very nice, i enjoyed reading this beautiful piece. Continue writing
xoxoxo :)

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Grammatically a good edit would do this the world of good, however, no edit can make the tears go back in, or casue them sensless under thoguht, well done, good read.

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lovely lovely lovely! i quite enjoyed it! very emotional. as far as mistakes, i saw only small typos. great write :)

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I love this. It tells a story that leaves questions in the reader's mind, but the answers to them aren;t important. The point this poem gets across is one of a proper perspective--what is important? In the end, it's family and love; forsaking pride. I loved it, as usual!
KH

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Excellent work for sure.

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Wow. Extremely thoughtful and very creative.
Well done
tilda

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