Bloody anger

Negative words and anger lead to dead-ends and separations. A wise man is quiet when anger control his mind.

                         







                                 










                                           Anger
 
Sometime I want to hurt someone.
 
Smart and wise-a*s faces  tempt you with comments and useless words.
 
People with no kindness or loyalty for anyone demand your time and duty.
 
Tire and drowning in personal problems.
 
Yearning for better days.
 
I don't blame no-one for my struggle and situation.
 
I believe we all dig our own graves. Good and bad.
 
Need to lose my anger. Family need me back.
 
I'm like so many.
 
Just staying ahead of the bills.
 
Waiting for a miracle that won't happen for a while.
 
Need to find laughter and peace.
 
Need to shut up and be kind.
 
Tomorrow will be a better day.
 
I will put aside my anger.
 
Can work it out with patience and love.
 
                     Coyote
                    17 March 2009

Author's Note

Patience and love is the way of the wise person.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Patience is definitely one that we learn as we journey into our lives, loving others for who they are instead of what we desire them to be. There are times all we can do is surrender and let go. You give hope to the hopeless. Great write. thanks for sharing.

[Star Wolf]

Life is a struggle, we all have our baggage to deal with. It's how we deal with it that makes us who we are. An outstanding poem!

[Stormy Weather]

This is neat because you not only explore the feeling of anger itself, but also the solution. I like that.

[Raven Starhawk]

This is something that greatly influences me. It is a poetic treasure in every shape and size. one cannot put a time stamp on such a piece and never should they as this is classic. Every word conveys to be something truthful and at the same time beautiful and raw.

[BlueDreams]

your thoughts are really applauded ... liked this craft a lot.. Great job :-)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[CHRIS ANDES]

you have the thoughts of reality...

[Arielle Ann]

Well I read in hundred stories- "when you are angry,look at the mirror"...but unfortunately mirrors are rarely present when we lose our temper...this write was a reflection of our day to day fluctuation in temperance ...wonderful...thanks for sharing!

[Zachary_James]

I enjoyed this, great words you have here.

[E.V. Black]

Sometimes I forget that I must have patience. I have a particular family member, my father, who I love as a parent but respect and live with as a person. We have never been best friends, and we don't share many interests. It is hard to hold a conversation with him. His temper is akin to mine, and I find myself wanting to just hit him sometimes. He makes me so furious that it's ridiculous.

I have to try to control that. You only reminded me of that.
I guess it's the struggles that make life.

[Tina Kline]

Your words are so true. But it is often a hard thing to do. This is a really wonderful write.