Bloody anger

Negative words and anger lead to dead-ends and separations. A wise man is quiet when anger control his mind.

                         







                                 










                                           Anger
 
Sometime I want to hurt someone.
 
Smart and wise-a*s faces  tempt you with comments and useless words.
 
People with no kindness or loyalty for anyone demand your time and duty.
 
Tire and drowning in personal problems.
 
Yearning for better days.
 
I don't blame no-one for my struggle and situation.
 
I believe we all dig our own graves. Good and bad.
 
Need to lose my anger. Family need me back.
 
I'm like so many.
 
Just staying ahead of the bills.
 
Waiting for a miracle that won't happen for a while.
 
Need to find laughter and peace.
 
Need to shut up and be kind.
 
Tomorrow will be a better day.
 
I will put aside my anger.
 
Can work it out with patience and love.
 
                     Coyote
                    17 March 2009

Author's Note

Patience and love is the way of the wise person.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Patience is definitely one that we learn as we journey into our lives, loving others for who they are instead of what we desire them to be. There are times all we can do is surrender and let go. You give hope to the hopeless. Great write. thanks for sharing.

[Pax]

anger can lead to drastic measures in life, patience makes it wiser and love makes it calm. nice

[∂αʌ<..]

totally true!

[PokemonFan#1]

A magnificent write Mr. Cyote.

My family (I think) have sorta been through the sameish thing.

It was a well spoken piece of work.

KEEP IT UP!

[Huggy Bear]

Lovely Piece

[P.S I Love You]

I can really feel the intense emotion of anger in this poem, I also agree with your note it is the way of the wise person ;)
xoxox ..

[......]

This is a breath taking, meaningful peace of art. You have really shown your emotions towards your problems. This is probally my favorite poem i have ever read in a while!!!! Thank you so very much Coyote you're truley a mind changer :D

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I agree with the note, wisdom comes with understanding and learning through the ages, howevver there is a lit to be said for anger, it is an emtion that few can control and a series of it can reap results, as history proves, one to think about for a while, well done, good read.

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

Nice narrative tone. Very similar to some of my own work. Blunt and self-assessing. A very enjoyable read, well done.

[Amila Jay]

Excellent write:)