Coyote song

Just a effort at music

                                Coyote song

On a quiet nights.
When the sky is clear.
Lonely people wait for no-one.
They pray to the moon and they make a fool's wish.
To repeat the dance  with old lovers on empty beaches.
To rebirth dreams lost in the cold September breezes.

From a distance.
A lone Coyote.
He sings to the moon.
His song is for his missed companion.
Can be heard by the lonely souls.

The memories of first sweet kisses.
The splendor of making love till the morning light.
The kind and sweet moment of looking into eyes of lovers.
Leave a empty spot needing a tender touch of love.

The Coyote song is a sound to rebirth hope.
He still called for his companion.
He called to the moon to announce his hunger and desire.
To run free and together again with his companion.

Sometime the sea can heal great pain.
Sometime you need to sing to the moon for forgiveness.
Love can falter and leave us weak and alone.
Time is the healer.
New doors must be re-open.

The song of two Coyotes can be heard now.
The call of the night brought his companion back.
They dance and run into the night together.
They sit upon a hill.
Give thanks in song of the Coyote to the moon for the gift of a return.

A lonely man hear the song of the two Coyotes.
Made him smile.
He closes his eyes and remember his missed love.
He does a silence prayer to know happiness.
To be like the Coyote.
To be able to run free and find someone to celebrate life with.
He walk away with less burden and sadness from the sea.

              Coyote
              Nov2011

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Author's Note

Finally a new poem. I try to write a song. I missed the point completely.

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

There is something about coyote's. They somehow seem to be just mystical creatures and you have written so eloquently on the song of the coyote. The subjects blend so beautifully together. Many descriptive stanzas fill this outstanding poem from beginning to end. Well done, loved it!.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nothing like the call of the wild... I love the translation of the coyote's cal to human emotions.

[Ed Hart]

there's not another poet here who in less than a day could have over a hundred readers, and more than 25% leave comments, but whose counting...it is your sensitivity of soul that brings us round, my friend

[Odile RAZAFIMANDIMBY]

I love your coyote song. You did not miss the point. It's just beautiful. Thanks for sharing Coyote.
"Love can falter and leave us weak and alone.
Time is the healer.
New doors must be re-open.

The song of two Coyotes can be heard now.
The call of the night brought his companion back.
They dance and run into the night together.
They sit upon a hill.
Give thanks in song of the Coyote to the moon for the gift of a return".

[Cheng Yew,Chew]

nice write,but it will be better if you can work on your grammar^^

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This was remarkable!

The way you portrayed the coyote and the pain of a human being missing their lost love is beautiful and touching. All I can say is that I love this poem and take it to heart because when we hear or see something as trivial as it is, it makes us realize that we need to set ourselves free and let the soul be at peace.

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[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Ohhh love this! Well done sweetie! =) I love those pictures and your poem has so lovely words.

Hey I write songs too =) and I love this and it's nice and it's flowing like a song really. =)

Thanks for sharing.

Love,
Sarah

[Aidz]

Lyrical in its intent, flows wonderfully... kewl story Coyote I enjoyed it :)

[Thea]

Aw, that was so wonderful...The flow from one line to another is just great...I noticed that you don't write often but whenever you write a new poem, you never fail the readers...We are always amazed by your skills in writing...Simple but beautiful...Excellent poem and thanks for sharing another remarkable piece to us... :)))

[KAREN]

Beautiful! I could see everything play out in my mind as I read the breat taking poem. It has a beautiful warmth to it, an awesome message.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

No point missed here! This was beautiful and my heart feels full and happy! LOVED IT!