Coyote song

Just a effort at music

                                Coyote song

On a quiet nights.
When the sky is clear.
Lonely people wait for no-one.
They pray to the moon and they make a fool's wish.
To repeat the dance  with old lovers on empty beaches.
To rebirth dreams lost in the cold September breezes.

From a distance.
A lone Coyote.
He sings to the moon.
His song is for his missed companion.
Can be heard by the lonely souls.

The memories of first sweet kisses.
The splendor of making love till the morning light.
The kind and sweet moment of looking into eyes of lovers.
Leave a empty spot needing a tender touch of love.

The Coyote song is a sound to rebirth hope.
He still called for his companion.
He called to the moon to announce his hunger and desire.
To run free and together again with his companion.

Sometime the sea can heal great pain.
Sometime you need to sing to the moon for forgiveness.
Love can falter and leave us weak and alone.
Time is the healer.
New doors must be re-open.

The song of two Coyotes can be heard now.
The call of the night brought his companion back.
They dance and run into the night together.
They sit upon a hill.
Give thanks in song of the Coyote to the moon for the gift of a return.

A lonely man hear the song of the two Coyotes.
Made him smile.
He closes his eyes and remember his missed love.
He does a silence prayer to know happiness.
To be like the Coyote.
To be able to run free and find someone to celebrate life with.
He walk away with less burden and sadness from the sea.

              Coyote
              Nov2011

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Author's Note

Finally a new poem. I try to write a song. I missed the point completely.

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

There is something about coyote's. They somehow seem to be just mystical creatures and you have written so eloquently on the song of the coyote. The subjects blend so beautifully together. Many descriptive stanzas fill this outstanding poem from beginning to end. Well done, loved it!.

[sarah]

This is amazing I really enjoy the great imaginary this is really wonderful!

[Morning Star]

Your words created such beautiful images and lyrics
Of the song of love and roaming free like the Coyote
this piece truly utters of life i love the sea and the picture here its awesome
Fantastic poem but it could still be a song
have an awesome week :)

[DalainaRenee]

Perfect poem that paints a perfect picture with words....instead of paint!

Very beautiful... lovely sea on the picture. The aspect that time is a healer, I agree... as it could be a killer too, ~ for me ;) I loved every line of your poetic song. Keep on writing! :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

wow just beautiful one of my faves of yours

[EMMIE]

HA HA, NO YOU DIDN'T MISS THE POINT AT ALL. THIS IS RIGHT ON POINT...WHATEVER YOU WANT IT TO BE, SONG POEM...YOU ALWAYS TELL STORIES WITH YOUR POEMS AND I THINK THAT IS ONE OF THE MANY QUALITIES ABOUT YOUR POETRY. THIS IS A GREAT AND SWEET WRITE.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

So beautiful, man in tune with nature and finding comfort there. Lovely!

[∂αʌ<..]

i think this is a very beautiful and soothing like poem! i like the way...it doesnt bring extreme happiness or whatsoever...just a little smile which just sums it all! :)

[TamiViolet]

I always say if we just observe the animals we could learn much.... They simply live the day, not dwelling on past pretenses or future possibilities.... Song or poem, it is a stunning work of freedom and the yearning to be close with nature when we are lonely.... Just adore the photos as well, my friend.

[Ruth]

I would argue you hit the point on the head hon lol
You see what a song holds and have given that quality of emotion, with a unique stance...power animals of intelligence talking and lamenting..
A tale that intrigues and is fascinating...song or poem...stunning!
And what is a song if not a poem :)
xoxo