Blue eyes

A very old poem. A wise man always speak with love and kindness to the woman he loved.

                  Blue eyes

A blue eyed angel is crying for me.
In the turmoil of a kind love.
The paradise of burning and powerful emotion.
It can create a strange prison.

I hold her too tightly.
Then I don't hold her enough.
The fine line of give and take.
Held on by a few words.

I tried to speak softly.
I don't want to create a wall of hate and separation.
When the fire of disappointment is upon us.

I close my eyes.
I whispered to my love.
"Let's stop this craziness. Let's sit together.
I need to feel you next to me. To  stop the anger and hurt.
Let's tear down the wall of hate and disappointment. Before the safety of
our love can't be repaired."

She falls into my arms.
I whispered. "In a nightmare you didn't love me anymore. You were my only
sweet dream. And I stood alone and watched you leave my life. I fell down and could
not get up."

"I allowed you leave my life. I didn't want to make you feel unwanted.
 You were my only wish. I would drown in sadness then to hold you as a
prisoner in a love you did not desire.
For your sweet love have given peace to a man running in circles,
till he looked into your beautiful blue eyes."

My blue eye lady kissed my lips and brought me close.
Told me. " You are my only love. You have taught me love is kind and good. Open doors with gentle touches to a new world. Love is hard and need two strong people holding on tight. Love can make us crazy. We need to be kinder and celebrate our time together."

I brought my blue eyed angel closer. I kissed her hands and told her. "I will always love you. The vision of you dancing to Leonard Cohen and allowing a foolish man into your life. I will always remember."

My beautiful lady whispered. " I will always be a safe place for you. I will love you forever and a day."

Lessons are many in  life.
 
Love brings love.
Kindness brings kindness.
Some words are best left un-said.
For words can break a heart forever.

                                Coyote
                              1981

Author's Note

Written in 1981. Any errors. Please assist. Never too old to learn.

Reviews

[Que]

Love this poem, it is so sweet and wholehearted: the reader can very easily see that the two truly loved each other.

One thing you should recheck are some verbs. For example at the end, it should say "love brings love" and "kindness brings kindness" etc.
And I'm not really sure, but I think it should be written as 'blue eyed angel'. Don't really know if that's correct though. :)

Anyway, beautiful poem!
Cheers.

[Olivia Petchonka's thou..]

I love this poem. You could really feel the love between each other. I could feel the emotion. Overall it was a great poem. :)

[joshua deathdealer]

I adore this write. I could really feel the emotions and I like the ending. So true. Thanks for sharing.

[AshleeKayann]

I do like this. It's written in a very unique rhythmic style that is at times hard to detect, but that almost adds to the central confusion and frustrated emotion. It's a bit lofty at times, but that isn't so much a bad thing, I just don't always prefer it. However, I enjoyed reading it and love the main theme of it overall. Good writing (:

[KAREN]

Beautiful! Heartfelt and well written!
Some words are best left un-said.
For words can break a heart forever.

[Samantha Heaton]

This poem is sweet and full of love. I like it. It's good.

[Scandalous]

This poem is absolutely brilliant and heartbreaking, something a true genius would compose.

~ Scandalous

[donny ingraham]

love this poem

[Helen Woodward]

Oh hon, I almost cried when I read this, you are such a beautiful person and your writing reflects that so much. You deserve all that is good in life and I hope you now have it.
As far as treating a woman well, I will say that men who don't do that...don't like themselves...
I hope people learn all there is to learn from this.

(((((((((((((Hugs)))))))))))))

[HorrorMaster]

Pretty good poem I like it

[MS. BABy]

even in the 80's you were a rennisance (forgive my spelling latenight at work) man I adore the lingual that lies beneath that flesh of yours Coyote.....You are a fantastic writer when you capture the essences of it all...I so enjoy your work thank you for sending me this....