Blue eyes

A very old poem. A wise man always speak with love and kindness to the woman he loved.

                  Blue eyes

A blue eyed angel is crying for me.
In the turmoil of a kind love.
The paradise of burning and powerful emotion.
It can create a strange prison.

I hold her too tightly.
Then I don't hold her enough.
The fine line of give and take.
Held on by a few words.

I tried to speak softly.
I don't want to create a wall of hate and separation.
When the fire of disappointment is upon us.

I close my eyes.
I whispered to my love.
"Let's stop this craziness. Let's sit together.
I need to feel you next to me. To  stop the anger and hurt.
Let's tear down the wall of hate and disappointment. Before the safety of
our love can't be repaired."

She falls into my arms.
I whispered. "In a nightmare you didn't love me anymore. You were my only
sweet dream. And I stood alone and watched you leave my life. I fell down and could
not get up."

"I allowed you leave my life. I didn't want to make you feel unwanted.
 You were my only wish. I would drown in sadness then to hold you as a
prisoner in a love you did not desire.
For your sweet love have given peace to a man running in circles,
till he looked into your beautiful blue eyes."

My blue eye lady kissed my lips and brought me close.
Told me. " You are my only love. You have taught me love is kind and good. Open doors with gentle touches to a new world. Love is hard and need two strong people holding on tight. Love can make us crazy. We need to be kinder and celebrate our time together."

I brought my blue eyed angel closer. I kissed her hands and told her. "I will always love you. The vision of you dancing to Leonard Cohen and allowing a foolish man into your life. I will always remember."

My beautiful lady whispered. " I will always be a safe place for you. I will love you forever and a day."

Lessons are many in  life.
 
Love brings love.
Kindness brings kindness.
Some words are best left un-said.
For words can break a heart forever.

                                Coyote
                              1981

Author's Note

Written in 1981. Any errors. Please assist. Never too old to learn.

Reviews

[Que]

Love this poem, it is so sweet and wholehearted: the reader can very easily see that the two truly loved each other.

One thing you should recheck are some verbs. For example at the end, it should say "love brings love" and "kindness brings kindness" etc.
And I'm not really sure, but I think it should be written as 'blue eyed angel'. Don't really know if that's correct though. :)

Anyway, beautiful poem!
Cheers.

[Dreamer]

This is amazing... The message and the emotions leave me speechless. I love this line 'I will love you forever and a day.' This is a love I wish to have. This is just so amazing:) I lack the words to tell you jus how wonderful it really is. I will keep your lessons in mind coyote. One of the wise one:)

[Stormy Weather]

This is beautiful.
"The fine line of give and take.
Held on by a few words."
Oh my gosh. So true. Amazing.

[A Risen Heroine.]

I love this poem, it's really sweet and beautifully written.
I really like how you wrote it, filled with love and desire for each other.
Well done and thank you for sharing.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[TamiViolet]

So, your blue-eyed beauty made you join the war? You are so young in the photo! :-) And so cute! You relate so many profound thoughts to your reader... a menagerie of beautiful feelings and expressions.... 'Words can break a heart forever'... This, I know. Wonderful autobiographical work.

[Rae]

You're an extraordinary poet. You really let yourself open. You should be really proud of your work.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Words can break a heart forever and it is best if we put our differences aside and not let dissension build until there is no bridge to cross to get back to where you were. Love this Coyote.

[Rene Velez]

nice work Coyote, heartfelt and genuine, keeping love and hope alive, well done my friend..

[Joiedevivre]

I love the sincerity and openness of your poems. I can see your integrity through those well written lines.

[Muse]

This story/poem emphasized the beauty of fighting to keep the love of your life. The struggles will come, but well worth it if you stay with it. One very small grammer check:
She fall into my arms.
did you mean She falls? Add an "s"

[Linear]

Always sad when love decides to leave, yet it leaves us with a gift that at first in our pain and sorrow we don't see, and that is a better understanding of what it means to be free, and next time just maybe we won't try to hold them so tight. Wonderful words my friend