A very heartfelt poem, you are correct that a non-military person has no real idea of what you go through (unless they are a correspondent or are caught up in the thick of it) and the sacrifices that have to be made (time, family to name but two).
But that this can lead to the ultimate personal sacrifice, they should be remembered for what they have done and not only by their comrades in arms.
A nice piece, needs a little work on spelling but the grammar is your voice and should be left alone.
This was such a beautiful tribute to all those who have sacrificed their lives for us to be safe in this country of ours. Coyote this moved me and I think it was perfect! 100/100
So powerful and oh so beautiful. Thank you for sharing this, not many know what soliders go through and what they give up, which includes, sadly, their lives. A wonderful ode to your dear friend. Nicely done.
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God Bless our Soldiers. We should all appreciate their sacrifies and all of us should remember and THANK those who have fought and fallen to give us the right to have an online writing community.
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Well written and close to my heart. Many people in my family are in the military, and I worry about them every time they are gone. Anyway, I didn't see any errors. XD
Great Poem.true feelings.It is hard to loose a friend to senselesness.I am against war.I wish the soldiers now would refuse to fight.I wish they would lead a millitary coo.We need the soldiers to fight with us in a revolution.Do you see what they are doing to our country.Not terrorist,not global warming,not ssmother nature.The Uninted States leadership is destroying this country.
A tried and heart string pulling piece, full of the rawness I have come to expect of you my darling, love the inlay of the pictures, helps the entire flow and adds to the emotion of your work, well done, great read.
Very warm and welcome, we should Always remember them, because they work so, so hard for us, people they don't even know but we trust them with our lives.
God Bless American Soliders.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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