A very heartfelt poem, you are correct that a non-military person has no real idea of what you go through (unless they are a correspondent or are caught up in the thick of it) and the sacrifices that have to be made (time, family to name but two).
But that this can lead to the ultimate personal sacrifice, they should be remembered for what they have done and not only by their comrades in arms.
A nice piece, needs a little work on spelling but the grammar is your voice and should be left alone.
I am sorry for your loss. I am sorry that there have been any losses at all. You've woven your friend's story beautifully throughout your poem and we should all raise a glass to the heroes we have known and all those we don't. I am truly moved by your words.
Donald will live on in his daughters' hearts...and in the thoughts of his friends like you. What a warm tribute this is, John. All veterans should be thanked for the sacrifices they make for us....and their families make those sacrifices too. I am sorry you lost your friend. This poem is touching. Lydi**
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Thank you Lydia. His kids are strong and wise. He would of been a Grandfather like me.
True words directly from the heart. We must remember all the sacrifices our brothers have made for our peace. Their bravery, their strength, their patriotism should be celebrated and remembered till the eternity.
It's wonderful...:)
Thank you for this. My brothers and deceased husband were military, many did not be as lucky...many did return with arms and legs missing. Many with P.D.S...May God be with them all. Valentine
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We must remember the men who gave everything for us. Thank you for reading and the comment.
thanks for that Coyote, yesterday i watched the poppy day memorial in london and saw so many who returned from wars in europe to afghanistan, without them and those who never came back where would we be now, if you go back to ww2 then without them i guess in europe at least we'd be speaking German and flying swastika's yesterday, we must remember them and your poem :)
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You are right. Many fought for freedom. We must hold freedom dear for the sake of the great men who .. read moreYou are right. Many fought for freedom. We must hold freedom dear for the sake of the great men who gave all. Thank you Richard for reading and the comment.
I'm sorry for your loss, but I'm glad you can bring such a positive and not necessarily happy, but definitely a feeling that everyone can stand behind and agree upon.I love how it is set up, the pictures, stanzas, grammar and tenses, everything. Really great.
Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you Kassie for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
A beautiful, heart felt tribute to your friend and to all the heros that keep us safe. You have touched my heart with this one my friend... stunning poetry
:) Julie
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Thank you Julie. Mercy is needed often in life. The mercy of concern and someone to listen.
It is so important to remember that soldiers are men and women with hearts and families. Here's to a day when they are all at home with their families.
Typo alert … I think you mean grateful … right now it is reading graceful.
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Thank you for the help and reading. I do appreciate.
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No problem … I noted your comment about errors … I usually read for meaning but I would be happy.. read moreNo problem … I noted your comment about errors … I usually read for meaning but I would be happy to give you a shout out on things when I notice:)
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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