Cry a tear

Cry a tear

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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My first published poem. Some small press put in in 1979.

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                              Cry a tear

My heart still can bleed with pain and loss still.
Tears can fall when the night appeared and when your memory
reappeared.

The tears of loneliness.
Loneliness of losing you completely.

I could have survived without your kiss.

But never seeing your beautiful face.
Blessing me with hearing your sweet voice.
Leave me empty and alone.

Your love of life.
Is much too difficult to forget.
I miss the long talks and laughter.

Days have passed since our parting day.
And your memory still lies heavy upon my mind.

Sometime so heavy.
The thought of you make me feel weaken.
Not to tears.

The tears had faded way on a cold rainy night
when I left you alone in your bed.

The sadness of our goodbye is always on my mind.

It was the last day I could see the life in your eyes.

                            Coyote
                            1979


© 2011 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
A old poem when youth was my strength.

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Wow Coyote this was so sad, so beautiful, so... I can't even fine the word that your pieces make me feel. Like I am above all, looking down, and your words just appear and softly they absorb into me, my thoughts, inside all. Like magic it is, your writing has such an effect it is amazing.. This is beauty, for I can feel it..

Mags xxx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I really love the last line, it made chills go down my spine.
Very beautiful poem here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful emotions swell solemnly in this lonely love lost lyric.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your last line cements the memory in my own eyes , i can always expect heartfelt poetry from the deepest reaches from you ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem..enjoyed very much

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this poem is good... but it seems like there's something missing in it..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad, yet still so very vivid in your mind. Always
hard to lose a love and still go on, to be strong,
and survive.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was so well written with many emotions, Sad but yet beautiful! The love that filled this poem was breath taking! Sad that they said good-bye! Lovely write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel this..........and thats all I will say :O(

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is just so lovely, yet with a twinge of sadness. I really enjoyed this piece. I am so glad you had this published. This is worth publishing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:( thi was a sad one. i recently had to break up with a woman because we were not working out at all... it is never easy to know that you have just left a part of your life behind... and you know that the woman will be there forever in your mind, even if you fidn " the one" you will always remeber " the other one" great write my friend!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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