My lady

A old poem written by a sad heart.

                               My lady

My lady,
I still cry out in sweet dreams your name.

So long since our lips had touched.
I still wish upon a star,
 to be able to look into your eyes.

I wish to awake with your body near.
To put my face into your long blond hair.
Be intoxicated by my love for you.

I wish to hold your tender hands on a walk by the lake.
Two  young titans with love as our shield.

My lady of joy and happiness.
Allow me to remember you sweetly.
For only in your arms did I feel complete.

Salvation I cannot find.
The knife of disappointment is cutting away my tenderness.
Your love is the only loss I can't get over.

My lady,
dressed in white.
Your long blond hair flowing in in the gentle breeze.
I dreamed you were whispering.
"I will only love you."

I have tried to erase your memory.
The memory is tattoos on my heart.
Paradise is rarely touched in a life.

Youth is the greatest high.
We were babies making great dreams happen.
Paradise of candles and the heat of love.
I didn't know sweet dreams would break my heart forever.

My lady of tenderness.
Your beautiful face will not be forgotten.
You were my first true love.

A sweet memory upon a old heart today.

                        Coyote
                        1982/2010

Author's Note

A poem written when age allow dream to be. Any mistakes. Please assist. Never too old to learn.
Coyote

Reviews

[Priyanka Natesh]

Oh my god...this poem is simply beautiful...Is there a more sublime emotion than love?
"My lady of tenderness.
Your beautiful face will not be forgotten.
You were my first true love.
A sweet memory upon a old heart today."
Lovely lines!I loved the poem!

[the_stoic]

raw emotions come out and weave such an exquisite piece of write .. that's the magic of love dear friend that never fades away .. need i say more !

[Dane Osborne]

Excellent and genuinely beautiful. This was an amazing line:
Youth is the greatest high.
We were babies making great dreams happen.
Paradise of candles and the heat of love.


Well done good sir(as per usual). 100/100

[Stacey]

This is so sweet and tender!!! It's hard to critique anything written with such pure and true emotion. This is a beautiful verse!

[Susie Q]

What a beautiful tribute to your first love. She has left her footprints upon your heart. I hope everyone can know a love like this in their lifetime. I enjoyed this write, Coyote.

[Liza]

how beautiful it is when more time moves in on our lives do we look back with even more beauty and admiration....expressive and emotional. thank you for the read request

[Alicante lullaby]

she is breathtaking and this was a riveting tale of love...

[Mark]

babies making great dreams happen is a great line.

[LSS]

Loved the poem. If this was written when you were just starting to write, you showed talent. But as often when someone writes about a passionate subject, they are at their best. Their insight, focus, and intent becomes the brush that paints the true picture for all to clearly see. Enjoyed this poem; I hope your parting was not one of tragedy, except of the heart, which is ever able to learn and grow.
Lar

This is so sweet, and made me cry. Oh my goodness. This is so fantastic.

[Greg Skura]

Hi Coyote!
Although many loves have come and gone, in my heart those who I loved will always have a place. This is a special tribute to a special lady.