For a hero

When you give your life for another. These people are the Angels waiting in heaven.

                                       

          Beautiful American

        (For Rachel Corrie. A human shield protecting woman and children.) 
                                                      

 
Just a woman.
 
She gave her heart to people far from her home.
 
Stood in front of guns and machines to save lives.
 
Protecting innocent people from.
 
The War machine in the hidden parts of the world from the world's eye sight.
 
She stood in front of a building.
 
Was crushed and die by Israel machinery.
 
Her life was lost for woman/men.
 
Who call her the Beautiful American..

 
                Coyote
 
                ( Need to go to her site. Rachel  Corrie.
                People like her are the real Angels in a life.
                They died for peace.)





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Author's Note

We can' t get blinded by hate. When the beaten dog because the abuser. Holding hate and death over another nation. Maybe the country need to look deeply at their goals. I pray for peace in the middle east. Rachel Corrie went with faith and love and die for strangers. She is a true hero we need to remember her and many more.
Coyote

Reviews

[Abd-afeez]

appreciation is one thing that counts a lot. to really value other's works and place them in high esteem. kudos to you for seeing a great deed of someone, and then creatively portraying her cherishable life with such well written poetry. keep up the good work my good friend.

[William Gardner]

died by Israel machinery. You use past tense throughout. Love the primary source add, well done to pay tribute. Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

She was killed and many keep her memory alive. I'm one of them. I appreciate the comment my friend.

[...]

I was actually write poem about her. Did you read her diary very powerful . Her story really touch me. Just ordinary women who decide change world and she was kill cause somebody don't want change. Very powerful words you put in. well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

I will research her diary. A brave girl willing to die for others. Her story broke my heart. She could of done so much.

[The Analog Kid]

Nice tribute to a beautiful person.

[Alexis]

Some people really are heroes and you've described one very nicely here. This was a powerful, strong poem and I thought it was very good! Another wonderful poem. You're an awesome writer!

[sarah]

This is an incredibly strong and amazing write. It caught my attention right off the bat great write

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

Some people are true heroes. Thank you for showing people of another.

[Kamran]

I wasn't familiar with Rachel Corrie before reading this, and I thank you for introducing me to a true hero. Great work Coyote, you always amaze.

[Sunflower 20]

beautiful, thank you for showing me a true hero, well done! :)

[MaddyHi]

This is a very good writing. Not only did she help children but she helped the children too. She must have been a powerful hero. People like this should be remembered and honered. Great job.

[dreaming dame]

:) It's amazing what some people can achieve. :)