Did I tell you?

Did I tell you?

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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A wise person is thankful for what he has.

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Did I tell you?


I don't remember if I told you how beautiful you are.


I have allowed so many things to blind my eyes.

Allowing disappointment to steal my smile and laughter.


I know.

If you left me.

I would become lost again.


I have twisted up my life in useless dreams.

Victories seem so far away.


Now I know.

You are my  only sweet dream.

That  I  have  gathered in my time of living.


I want to tell you.

I love you more than my own life.


Without you.

I would have no purpose.


Your love for me is a blessing.

A gift to a man so thankful for you.


Thankful for a kind lady  that touched his life.

I love you.



                Coyote

© 2015 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
We need to be thankful for the people who stay with us in the bad and the good times.

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Your words are beautiful truth Coyote. This poem is a jewel to put in the crown of your love. It matches her beauty, as the photo shows. Eloquent, lyrical, tender...a song to the person whose love must never be taken for granted...in good times and bad...”Did I tell you?” In this poem, you did. Superb!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.



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A sweet tribute to love...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Speechless. Amazing job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you're sweet for writing such sentiment.
it's nice to know one is appreciated and thought
of so dearly. we all need to hear it now and again.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww this is a sweet touching poem I like this one well done you managed to evoke emotions and love and telling that special someone you love them everyday of your life it`s a nice read :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, just beautiful...a lucky lady is she to have these sentiments poured out for her hon...A fabulous piece of poetry, emotional and well formed...Loved it!!!
Kudos :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece is truly heartfelt and full of other emotions. You are right. We need to say thank you more to others who are there. Appreciation is sorely needed. Thank you once more for writing this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing, i can see the emotion and the love that you have and i can tell that you are definately grateful for the person who has stayed with you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heartfelt! love never ends when love is very powerful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very emotional and heartfelt. I like the way you wrote it, I like the structure. And I couldn't agree more with you on being thankful for the people who stay with us through the bad and the good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful, heartfelt piece. I don't feel any need, whatsoever to have you change around any of the writing, the structure or the wording. As a writer you choose to write the words as they come to you, in the structure you're inspired by at the time, and with the beauty which you feel through your words.

Well written, and a beautiful piece. You are quite right about needing those who stay with you through thick and thin. So many cut and run too easily.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poet and writer who love to read and write. My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life. Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words. Remember .. more..

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