Rise of Mars

Need strength and wisdom to change a world

Rise of Mars
 
Mars has been trying to sleep.
The nightmares got worst.
He dreams he standing in Somalia.
 
The wars were being fought with woman and children.
Torture of non-soldiers.
Just babies and innocence woman being killed.
Raping and violence all around him.
He start swinging his sword killing and killing.
He falls down and cries out.
What is this s**t Lord?
 
Then on the sad day.
When two nuclear powers started the end of Earth with the bombs.
 
He escape and hid in hell.
Satan welcome him  with open arms.
To keep  Mars at bay will insure his plan would be complete soon.
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Nature roamed the Earth for 10 years.
Seeing no hope in sight.
 
 She goes to her mountains and waits for the end.
 She dreams the wood Nymphs were singing at morning at dawn.
Their songs were so beautiful.
 
She wondered what happen  to the wood Nymphs and sea Nymphs?
 
Satan was ready to celebrate victory.
He saw no way possible for him to lose.
His deal with God works out.
 
Neither was to get involved.
He did and his victory would be his profit.
 
Mars was awoken by too much noise.
 He stands up and swings his sword.
He yelled shut up. shut up please.
 
 He is alone.
The song was a memory.
He decide to follow  the music.
 
 Kelly Alexander is 10 years old.
 She is surrounded by the wood Nymphs.
 
They sing to the little girl playing in the dirt.
The wood Nymphs touch the dead trees and green appears.
 Kelly laugh and caress the soil.
Her  hands bring life to the dead soil.
 
Years ago she escaped.
Her father found her at 1 years old. 
Playing in the dirt.
She was surrounded by live plant life.
 
The town protects her now.
Her green houses are protected by cover.
 
kelly sings her spirit song.
The plants grow.
Food for the small village.
 
Mars appears in front of the wood Nymphs swinging his sword.
They run behind Kelly Alexander.
 Kelly wants to scream thinking he was a bandit wanting to rob her.
 
He stops and could not believe.
He was in a Green house.
Full of plant life.
 
He looks outside and saw people coming to protect Kelly.
He put down his sword and caress the soil.
 
He ask her was she a angel?
 Kelly smiles and laughs.
 Goes to Mar.
 
Kelly touch his face.
She tells him I'm Kelly Alexander.
Who are you giant man?
He whisper I'm Mars.
 
Tear begin to fall down his face.
He felt hope for the first time in many years.
 
 The Village people surround Mars.
 Kelly tells  them this was her friend.
He was Mars.
 
Jason show him the small village.
Told him of a strange man who gave them food.
Showed them where to find water.
 
Jason told Mars we were alone. Then.
Everyday more people showed up.
 
We are Ok.
The Green houses are limited.
 We need the sun?
 
Nature is feeling weak with sadness.
She hears a whisper.
 
Sweet Beatrice look at me my love.
 
She sees Mars standing over her.
 She ask where have you been?
 
He tells her.
 I was hiding in hell waiting for the end.

 
She looks to the sky.
 Whispered won't be long till all Earth is dead.

 
Mars takes her hand.
Tells her Earth is not dead yet.

 
 He kisses her forehead.
 My Beatrice I must show you a Angel.

 
Mars and Nature walk hand in hand.
The wood nymphs sing our Goddess is with us.

 Our beauty has returns.
They dance around her.
 
She ask how can this happen?

 
Mars ask kelly Alexander to come forward.

 
kelly is afraid of Nature.

 
Nature is tall and her long blond hair shine like the sun.
Her blue eyes were like a clear ocean blue.

 
She goes to kelly and touch her face.

 
Nature smiles and thank God for the gift of life.
She looks at Mars.

 
Tells him the child must be protected.
She is the gift of life.

 
Kelly looks up at her.
Tells Nature I got a story to tell you.

 
Nature walk with the village people.
The clouds began to desperse.

 
Everyone stops and cries out.

 
 The sun is shining.

 
Jason wishes Angela was here to see this day.

 
              Coyote
 
 
 
 

Author's Note

Part two. I hope the story is worth reading. Any help is always appreciated.

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Rise of Mars"
This was an interesting tale of the desire for good in our world. The struggle within our world is seen in your words. I found the metaphors within of hope and descouragement something identifiable for our day. Reading a good story always inspires and this one did. It has a feeling of "is the earth going to survive." Kelly Alexander and the unity of those wanting to protect her is refreshing too. Beautiful story.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kathy. I rewrote this story. Better editing. Complete story is one now. Just my attempt to know hope.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Coyote,
I find that writing for me is sometimes just my need to process life. I understand where your coming from. I really like that you have made a place for hope. It takes work sometimes to live and grow. Good job on this story. I have enjoyed it.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Neville]

These words are mighty powerful in their own right and need no help from anyone to shape or change them... You have created here something that reads like a 21st century mythological tale that really needs to be re-born and become a legend .... this has everything Johnnie C....... N

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Neville. You are very kind. I wrote the story for my baby girl 22 years ago.

[Neville]

I could feel it my friend ... a whole lotta love and I bet she is still your baby girl....

[Valentine]

WHEW. I love your back and forth writing. It is a part of your heritage I think. You have many inner thoughts wishing to get out. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

I wrote this for my daughter in 1996. Need a edit. God won in the end. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[Helen Woodward]

Your story is well worth reading Coyote, you have a terrific grip on good verses evil and Nature and Mars are now hand in hand (comforting for your reader) I find the Satanic influence timely and a truth...making this very much like a prophecy.
Keep an eye on your grammar okay?
Love the story so far...
Cheers,
Helen~

[Awdures]

I adore epic work, it reads like an epic poem and it's just so brutally honest. I'm enjoying the continuation and the flow of the story you are giving us here.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

mystical story thus far..I like the feeling of hope tho many adversities to overcome..
loved it.

Chloe

[HorrorMaster]

Very fantastic story

[Star Wolf]

This is a fantastic story. I have to read the first part now. Awesome job.

[Desert Dreamer]

What a wonderful story of hope in a time of despair, when the gods Nature and Mars walk the earth. Love your story.

[Norma M Sutton]

I found only one thing that you might want to correct. In this sentence "Seeing no hope in site." I think you want sight. Site is like a place, website, etc. Sight is to see.