The dance of emotion

Life is fair. We must give to receive.

  The Dance of Emotion.
 
A sweet angel was waiting on the bed for me.
Her skimpy negligee showing silky smooth skin.
She told me. "Come to me please."
I went to her and sat close to her.
 
She desired proof of love.
I traced her body with my fingers.
Her perfume create a havoc.
I desired to taste her tender skin.
Ravish her voluptuous body.
 
I whispered. "All I can give to you is a rendezvous of a misguided man with the desire of illicit and raunchy sex.
I had a meltdown in the emotion of love.
Nullified my heart so long ago."
 
"My only redemption is my desire not to teach you the melody of tarnish words and leave you alone in the seize of hate and loneliness."
 
Beautiful brown eye woman smiles.
 Kissed my hands.
She brought her face to my face. Gave me soft and warm kisses.
She whispered.
 
"We are pure for a moment and treasure perfection in love are only shadowed dreams now. Love is a sham."
 
"Now pride and savor love are precious only to young girl dreams.
I want someone to ignite my soul.
I need naughty and sordid nights of passion."
 
Sometime the prelude to the story is written.
The rise and fall of our heart must surge or what is left?
 
I touch her  silky skin.
Watched the stirring of her  beautiful body.
I stroked her long legs and brought them across my lap.
 
In the trance and solemn light of candle lights.
I kissed her  tan shoulders.
I stripped and lay on the bed.
 
She  straddled me.
She whispered.
"In the misguided game of love."
 
"The saga must go on till the story ends in happiness.
Or at least we will have sweet dreams and memories."
 
                        Coyote
                        22 March 2009
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Author's Note

A old poem when I was younger and life was a open road. Any mistakes I would be thankful for the help. A wise person accept help with thankfulness. Someone was kind enough to assist.

Reviews

[Revolutionary]

I am not used to you writing about such things.You should walk on the erotic edge more often.You are good at it.I don't get the love is a sham part though.I do not think the love was a sham even if it was only the once you loved it.take the love is a sham part out cause it is wrong and it does not go in this poem.all is love

[Emily Rae]

i love the line, "all I can give you is a rendezvous of a misguided man with the desire of illicit and raunchy sex"--great write

[～ Moonlight ～]

It surely is emotional :) I think, personally this reminds me of a lulaby!? but, still love it all the same!'

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

I loved the way you wrote this with such honesty of your passions and emotions. My analysis is this encounter was between two strangers in need of compassion, sexual release, and honest emotions in a single moment of time. No holds barred, tender but raw and honest in a game of love knowing it would go nowhere; only in those moments of time. Each giving what they could to help one another in moments of need.

"I want someone to ignite my soul.
I need naughty and sordid nights of passion."
Wow this is what I mean by honesty; you, a young man, lonely and away from home in need of emotional and sexual release, yet tender and honest.

Coyote, never change the passion and honesty in your writings, there may be a few grammatical errors but your content is always so pure, real compassionate and tender, which brings the me as a reader such joy in reading.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Wow, this is intense.

[Libby McKeown]

Her perfume created a havoc. What a great line! The work as a whole needs to be a bit leaner so that the imagery shines through the words, not stifled behind them. But that's just my humble opinion. Please keep sharing!

[Sabbath_Nikole]

This is a different side of your work I have yet to see. Very interesting, you've got a good handle on it. No so crazy about the love message going on in this one, but it is different, and i do like different. "Or at least we will have sweet dreams and memories." The best message to have and hold onto, if all else fails. Keep it up coyote.

[JenLyn]

Very erotic, I love it!

[ashley]

Another fantastic poem. You are very good at painting a picture. Great job! :D

[Undying Glory]

vivid and passionate work, although i would be the best person to really comment on this. great poem though