I worry for this world. When I was young. I was going to do great things. Now I see we added to the waste and abuse of this planet. For the sake of the children. We must find sanity and try to save the planet before the road to hell can't be fixed.
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A very poignant write my friend. (We must stop the hate. And the violence and the useless killing. Keep the family together. The healing must begin. Or the eyes and mind of our children will turn against us. For leaving nothing.) That last line says it all. ~Sharon
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Thank you, dear Sharon. I pray we learn. We must be kind to nature and to each other.
not enough people pay attention to the little things in life :) Nature and our Children are our BIG Little things :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
You are right. We need Nature more than she need us. Old Native American saying. "Teach the children.. read moreYou are right. We need Nature more than she need us. Old Native American saying. "Teach the children well. They are then future and the strength of the new days." Thank you Nancy for reading and the comment.
10 Years Ago
I love nature and am just waiting for her to wake up! she is still asleep here
Yes, your piece tells of that walk that we never really know we are taking, yet once we reach the destination there is no way of going back, well done, good read.
Hmmmm...It's a very beautiful poem. However, I've never shared any sentiments with environmentalists. We don't owe our planet anything. It's just a floating rock in space. If we manage to create space colonies, I can see no reason why we shouldn't leave it behind. I do agree with the anti-war argument though. Humanity cannot move forward scientifically when we're stuck in the past solving disputes like wild animals.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Planet give us food, water and medicine. We need fresh air. Already in some places diseases are spre.. read morePlanet give us food, water and medicine. We need fresh air. Already in some places diseases are spreading because of bad water. Food can't grow in dead soil. Native American wisdom. One planet and one people. Mother nature need us less than we need her. Good luck on the space colonies unless you are wealthy. Time to be logical. Look at the map of clean water in the world. Most of the Great lakes are polluted. Time is running out. I hope for better days. Thank you for reading and the comment.
11 Years Ago
Once again I must disagree. It has been proven that food can be grown in space colonies through gree.. read moreOnce again I must disagree. It has been proven that food can be grown in space colonies through green houses. Air can be recycled infinitely. Water can also be recycled. If necessary one can filter and drink their own urine for extended amounts of time. Finally, medicine is made from plants and chemicals which can, once again, be grown or synthesized in space. The Earth is a very useful biosphere that we would be remiss to abuse, but within the next century or so, I doubt it will be irreplaceable.
my and my two besties always have that kind of conversations
on one hand we have all the knowledge we want and on the other hand we are behaving like animals
we talk about fasion aliens so many things like that while someone somwhere is huggry, abused by the strong...
our future generation not gonna proud of us for what we created, if we didnt save what we have now...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
If we don't change. We won't leave much for your generation and nothing for the future. Thank you fo.. read moreIf we don't change. We won't leave much for your generation and nothing for the future. Thank you for reading and the comment.
amen amen I agree with you. we need to wake up and stop destroying what our heavenly father gave us. people needs to wake up and smell the coffee, it has been on fire for a long time. great one, love this.
Wow, so true! Unfortunately, for most people, all we can do is the best we can do, as our part. I agree with Revolutionary, however; we must remain aware and express our desires to the "powers that be," often. I very well written poem.
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