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Germany in the 1940s held similar views and turned to an erratic and psychotic leader to manage it. This and other countries are doing the same today and will pay the same toll. I don't mean to preach, and yet this was foretold long ago... "terrible times will come. For men will be lovers of themselves, lovers of money, boastful, arrogant, abusive, disobedient to their parents, ungrateful, unholy, unloving, unforgiving, slanderous, without self-control, brutal, without love of good, traitorous, reckless, conceited, lovers of pleasure rather than lovers of God, having a form of godliness but denying its power." It's a sad world in which we live.
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I agree James. We are on the train ride to hell. This is a old poem with the same meaning today. I h.. read moreI agree James. We are on the train ride to hell. This is a old poem with the same meaning today. I have five grandchildren. I hope we leave something for them.
I think this line, " Impoverish inflicts all with equality.
Could be made better if you replace "impoverish" with "poverty"...it will generate a better syntax. Just my humble opinion. A great deal of truth espoused within this write.
As a Canadian, reading your plead for better leadership, i find it resonates here, too. Many have grown apathic, in their own responsibilities to society. Choicing to believe that "Big Brother" will fix everything, why bother. There is a role for government, but we, "the people" have to be willing to pitch in and act. Else, we are digging our graves, with borrowed time and money. Thank you, for posting this provocative poem.
You have spoken much truth, here. We as a people, not individuals must stand together as one, as intended by the Forefathers of this nation. A democracy does not exist without this action... Outstanding piece that leaves much for the readers to ponder.
Superb, a powerful and hard hitting poem no doubt. the concept and idea was great, and the expressions were great as well.
an excellent read and a lot to learn from this
My lips are sealed and my eyes are blind !!! Yikes this is not one subject I want to get into with you heck no!
Now... we are going to have fun right? any ideas or imagination ? I need help si !
Bueno... This is going to be great !
Thanks... you play fare and square , magical.
very emotional and strong poem you got here..this is a great read..and I tell you leaders must read this great poem of yours to open their minds about the present..keep it up..!
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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