The lucky or the crazy.

I lived on the coastline of California for three years. No better place to be.

             The lucky or the crazy

We danced by the light of the moon.

Every Saturday and Sunday we came and watched the sun fall into the sea.

I watched you write my name in the sand.

You told me I was the only sweet dream in your life.

I brought you  close to me and  I whispered how beautiful and sweet you are .

You got up.

Danced  circles around me.

 You come to me.

Gave me  gentle  sweet kisses.

The waves danced upon the shores of Monterey.

A big winter storms was coming.

We sat together.

I held you close and

we were waiting for a purpose to be alive.

Our favorite time of the year is the storms of December and January.

We would put on our wet suits and become part of the sea.

We would fight our way out and rock and roll with the ocean.

Becoming one with the powerful waves.

Your loving glances I could see from a distance.

The ocean tossing us taking away our sadness and misery.

We would go to her apartment.

Take off the wet suits and tried to keep warm.

Our two nude bodies laid across the bed with a heavy blanket..

Your  nude body  was  so beautiful.

I told you sweet lies.

I called you my only sweet dream.

Held you like you were  my first and only love.

Our nights were in slow motion.

Two lonely people reaching out for a bit of tenderness and passion.

I told you.

You are a sweet gift in a life that was going to hell.

Your blue eyes gazed into my eyes.

Looking for any sign of love or real emotion.

A tear rolled down your beautiful face.

You whispered the road has turned me so cold.

I told you to leave me before I turn into stone.

I told you.   I would miss you and  I need you.

I want to be able to kiss your sweet lips.

Touch those beautiful long legs.

Feel your warm body against me.

I know I would  be a fool to leave you.

Before I found you  sitting alone on the Seaside beach.

I was an undone painting.

Needing the tender touches of your  fingers and hands

to mold me to someone with dreams and able to love.

You  laid your face into my chest and whispered don't leave me.

I told you.

I will stay with you my lover.

We need to move slow and easy.

The path to paradise and love is for the lucky or crazy.

I kissed you and brought you near to me.

                         Coyote

                         December

                          1995

Author's Note

A old poem of a good memories. Any mistakes please help me. The tenses in this poem don't seem correct. Thank you for stopping by and reading.
Coyote

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Coyote Poetry,
"The lucky or the crazy"
This has the natural rise and fall of the ocean's roar within it's words.
Young and untried are the two within the narrative but reality is setting in. Love is being tasted and both are counting the cost of what they want from one another and if it is within them to see it through.
To read a raw and real and honest sharing from another's experience is beautiful.
I was wishing that their was a guaranteed happy ending here but then how much of life is guaranteed. To be able to focus on the good is the ticket. This was just that.
Thank you so much!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kathy. Life is chance. We must take many.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

You are right about that!

[Ladysue]

This was beautiful and very moving. Tender... Nicely done

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

Wow, I'm completely speechless. What a beautiful and breathtaking poem. Your loneliness and compassion and love in this poem are conveyed with the utmost clarity. Everyone from the kindest to the cruellest need to taste love at least once to survive. The metaphor of the ocean also added much depth to this poem. A very inspirational read, thank you. It is wonderful to hear that you were able to experience something as sweet and pure as this, and also provides a wonderful glance into your memories and emotions linked to your soul. A very insightful and wonderful piece, thank you.

[Jessica Mai]

This is really great. The imagery was beautiful and touching and i just loved it!

[jeff hackworth]

its pure poetry

[Daniel Gardner]

This is really good. Great imagery. I don't think it seemed awkward. Maybe its just that most people don't write in present tense in that way? They tend to write in "I walked" instead of "I walk". But I think it sounds good as it is.

[Angel's Lady]

How romantic...the beach is the best for such nights, huh? :)

Great write!

[Jacqueline Lopez]

This poem I truly love, because it's different from what I've read. I love your sexuality. I got confused when you said you told her lies, but like you said she's only your lover and in real life this is the way it really is. You have many nice lines in this poem. This poem is beautifully written!

[poetic soul]

your love poems have always been very special and enchanting in its own way...jus like this one...
i really loved the way your poems end...especially this one...it leaves a mark!
awesome!!!

:) Smiles,
Krishna

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"I was an undone painting. " I love that! You, sir, are a romantic and I can really appreciate that. The quality of your poetry tugs at the heart and pulls us into your thoughts and musings. Great stuff.

[Vava]

The poem was amazing! How you described the touch and emotion you put into this piece. Nothing can compare to a writing when someones feelings pour into it!