Angela

We can fall so low and deep. Need someone to pull us up to see daylight.

            Angela

 
Her beauty had lessen with time.
The circle of darkness surrounded her beautiful blue eyes.
Lack of sleep and proper diet.
Left her beaten, betrayed and dreams limited to daily survival.
In her 21 years of life.


Her blue eyes brought me to her.
Her long legs that went on for miles.
Were still temptation for the soul wanting too little now.

 
Her fearless eyes turn soft as she tremble in the face of tenderness.
I told her please please stay with me. We will have no secrets.

 
"I have been living on borrow kisses, loan embraces and leased love.
I whisper I have been waiting for you."

 
"We have nothing to lose.
All we have is painful and harsh desires that brought us together."

 
Sweet Angela looked into my eyes.
Searching.


She told me "I'm dirty with sin.
I have abandon all who have tried to love me.
I don't deserve you."
Her hand held my hand so tightly as she spoke.

 
I whispered " My fallen Angel.
There are few saints anyway.
I will take you places you have never been.
We will walk on long beaches.
Drink wine and talk till the sun falls into the sea.
I will hold you like you were my first love."

 
When the dusk came.
We ate  and talked.
Felled on my soft bed.
I told her "All we have is the desire of pleasure left.
I will find your secret softness. Make you feel wanted and alive.

 
I  whispered a liar prayer.
Told her how beautiful and wonderful she was.
 I  explored her with delight and discover all her  hidden secrets.

 
I looked into  her blue eyes as her slender body move over my flesh.
 A small tear appeared in her eyes.
She whispered  "I will leave before the morning light."

 
I smile and caressed her beautiful face.
Whispered " We have lost nothing.
I just wanted to see your smile and hear your voice."

 
"I will be here when you need me."
Angela kissed me and lays her head into my chest.


                 Coyote
                                      

Author's Note

When we fall down so low. Someone must pull us back and show us the way to peace and happiness again.
Coyote

Reviews

[Theresa]

Sometimes in life you fall and sometimes you are just lucky enough to have that special someone who helps you along. I loved the lines:
"I have been living on borrow kisses, loan embraces and leased love.
I whisper I have been waiting for you."
Beautifully written. Loved it.

[Tapsi]

i can literally feel the the burden of emotions and the struggle for survival. the poem is an epitome of heartfelt expressions....i enjoyed it like anything..an excellent masterpiece.

[Rose]

This is a Extraordinary poem! It reminds me of a story I heard once.
Beautifully written and the message is not crystal clear, but you get to search for it.
I enjoyed it very much.
Thank you!
Yours truely~ Rose

[You Don't Know Me]

I could really feel the emotional burden that Angela carries, and I can feel yours as well. You want nothing more than to save her and it sounds like your love truly can. I only noticed a few things that didn't flow well for me, but it wasn't anything major; most likely typos. I love the story you have captured here and it seems to have touched a lot of hearts.

[JustWantLove]

Very nice job!

[Tina Kline]

A sad yet very tender and loving poem. I agree, when we've fallen and are so terribly lost we need someone to pull us out. Those are the Angels come to us. This is wonderful. Love it.

[Georgia Gypsy]

it is hard for some to see the light in their life. You have showed this with your poetic pen. At least she knows there is a place for her when she needs it, and she knows love, even if she cant fully accept it.

[deeps]

This is such a wonderful write here. I like this alot. A very beautiful write here. I like this alot

[Leaner Pastures]

Wonderful. I have really come to enjoy the brush strokes of your words as you paint these sketches that blend the colors of the physical and emotional worlds in which we dwell. Another fine masterpiece. Well Done.

[Emily B]

sometimes all it takes is a soft voice or a warm touch . . .

we all need someone to show us the way