Angela

We can fall so low and deep. Need someone to pull us up to see daylight.

            Angela

 
Her beauty had lessen with time.
The circle of darkness surrounded her beautiful blue eyes.
Lack of sleep and proper diet.
Left her beaten, betrayed and dreams limited to daily survival.
In her 21 years of life.


Her blue eyes brought me to her.
Her long legs that went on for miles.
Were still temptation for the soul wanting too little now.

 
Her fearless eyes turn soft as she tremble in the face of tenderness.
I told her please please stay with me. We will have no secrets.

 
"I have been living on borrow kisses, loan embraces and leased love.
I whisper I have been waiting for you."

 
"We have nothing to lose.
All we have is painful and harsh desires that brought us together."

 
Sweet Angela looked into my eyes.
Searching.


She told me "I'm dirty with sin.
I have abandon all who have tried to love me.
I don't deserve you."
Her hand held my hand so tightly as she spoke.

 
I whispered " My fallen Angel.
There are few saints anyway.
I will take you places you have never been.
We will walk on long beaches.
Drink wine and talk till the sun falls into the sea.
I will hold you like you were my first love."

 
When the dusk came.
We ate  and talked.
Felled on my soft bed.
I told her "All we have is the desire of pleasure left.
I will find your secret softness. Make you feel wanted and alive.

 
I  whispered a liar prayer.
Told her how beautiful and wonderful she was.
 I  explored her with delight and discover all her  hidden secrets.

 
I looked into  her blue eyes as her slender body move over my flesh.
 A small tear appeared in her eyes.
She whispered  "I will leave before the morning light."

 
I smile and caressed her beautiful face.
Whispered " We have lost nothing.
I just wanted to see your smile and hear your voice."

 
"I will be here when you need me."
Angela kissed me and lays her head into my chest.


                 Coyote
                                      

Author's Note

When we fall down so low. Someone must pull us back and show us the way to peace and happiness again.
Coyote

Reviews

[Theresa]

Sometimes in life you fall and sometimes you are just lucky enough to have that special someone who helps you along. I loved the lines:
"I have been living on borrow kisses, loan embraces and leased love.
I whisper I have been waiting for you."
Beautifully written. Loved it.

[Wildfleour]

A bittersweet story.......so touching.

[Cassandra D.]

this was a truly beautiful poem...

[Liz Alexander]

Oh my word! IT so beautiful

[Alicante lullaby]

a lovely write,,,,,hope shining,,,faith's pretty face,,,rare pearls of true love,,,one that gives,wants nothing,,,

[Brandee D. Hack]

It is so beautiful and compelling. Such a sad piece yet so understanding and kind. There are flowing emotions floating off of each word. It's a brilliant piece. :) Did this actually happen?

[Wicahpi]

an emotion felt write. well done

[Ladysue]

This is a very moving piece. Beautifully written and truly heartfelt. I loved it...

[::Yv0nne::]

Oh my goodness...this really is a beautiful poem. YOu have painted a picture of love and happiness of the heart. These are my favorite lines...

I have been living on borrow kisses, loan embraces and leased love.
I whisper I have been waiting for you.

You have finally found the one your soul loves!! Despite however many relationships....they were nothing compared to this love. Great poem!! One of my new favorites.

[Crazy Colorado]

Beautifully written! I can so relate! When we hurt, we will grasp fo anything just to feel! Happiness, even for a little while, Is a good thing. LOL

[Honeypot]

This to me is your best yet. You have some excellent phrases like "liars prayer".
The whole borrow, loan, lease is fantastic and makes me wish I'd thought of it. I think if it was cleaned up this would seem like the work of a published poet.