Angela

We can fall so low and deep. Need someone to pull us up to see daylight.

            Angela

 
Her beauty had lessen with time.
The circle of darkness surrounded her beautiful blue eyes.
Lack of sleep and proper diet.
Left her beaten, betrayed and dreams limited to daily survival.
In her 21 years of life.


Her blue eyes brought me to her.
Her long legs that went on for miles.
Were still temptation for the soul wanting too little now.

 
Her fearless eyes turn soft as she tremble in the face of tenderness.
I told her please please stay with me. We will have no secrets.

 
"I have been living on borrow kisses, loan embraces and leased love.
I whisper I have been waiting for you."

 
"We have nothing to lose.
All we have is painful and harsh desires that brought us together."

 
Sweet Angela looked into my eyes.
Searching.


She told me "I'm dirty with sin.
I have abandon all who have tried to love me.
I don't deserve you."
Her hand held my hand so tightly as she spoke.

 
I whispered " My fallen Angel.
There are few saints anyway.
I will take you places you have never been.
We will walk on long beaches.
Drink wine and talk till the sun falls into the sea.
I will hold you like you were my first love."

 
When the dusk came.
We ate  and talked.
Felled on my soft bed.
I told her "All we have is the desire of pleasure left.
I will find your secret softness. Make you feel wanted and alive.

 
I  whispered a liar prayer.
Told her how beautiful and wonderful she was.
 I  explored her with delight and discover all her  hidden secrets.

 
I looked into  her blue eyes as her slender body move over my flesh.
 A small tear appeared in her eyes.
She whispered  "I will leave before the morning light."

 
I smile and caressed her beautiful face.
Whispered " We have lost nothing.
I just wanted to see your smile and hear your voice."

 
"I will be here when you need me."
Angela kissed me and lays her head into my chest.


                 Coyote
                                      

Author's Note

When we fall down so low. Someone must pull us back and show us the way to peace and happiness again.
Coyote

Reviews

[Theresa]

Sometimes in life you fall and sometimes you are just lucky enough to have that special someone who helps you along. I loved the lines:
"I have been living on borrow kisses, loan embraces and leased love.
I whisper I have been waiting for you."
Beautifully written. Loved it.

[Gandré]

here I really like this soft voice of eroticism, it is fabulously wealthy tenderness. Isn't poetry dedicated to love poetry? Thank you for reading my poem+ thank you for your review of Effloresce. Hope, all is well.

[Sheila Kline]

A very beautiful write of love and devotion.

The flow and imagery are excellent!

"I whisper my fallen Angel
There are few saints anyway.
I will take you places you have never been.
....................a precious line!

[Ross Saunders]

Couple of spots read awkwardly, but otherwise a very solid poem. I cut and pasted a couple of them here. Also, the punctuation was tad bit confusing. This was a very beautiful poem.

"Left hers beaten, betrayed and dreams limited to daily survival."
"I will whisper a liars pray."

[Jeff Bresee]

Those who get torn up by love become so fragile and yet so brazen. They need someone to rest their head on. This poem makes me feel for her and the many like her. Good Work.

[Jeannie Wilder]

your line There are few Saints anyways really struck me. emotion and scene is very well done!

[emmajoy]

This has a touch of heaven in every line. Whether this is truth or not, the symbology is wonderful. Your words run very slowly, carefully and tenderly as if thoughts are strong and fresh.

'I smile and caress her beautiful face.
Whisper we have lost nothing.
I just wanted to see your smile and hear your voice.'

The above verse is so eternally loving ..

Wonderful!

[Undying Glory]

freaking beautiful and nice. everything flows really well, even your note at the end. this is really the complete package...awesome

[MagiCrystal]

Angela is a very lucky woman... this is like a love story
Your story and well detailed in this piece
I wonder many times what drives us to feel this way
and filled our lifes with so much joy
Not many have the honor to met you
Not many have the luck to find it
But when we find it.. Oh.. so hard to let you
Many times Love come
Knocks on the door and we missed it
Love had so many faces...I agree that we humans
Will never find the meaning of love.. but we can go on dreaming.
amazing words.. You have the gift..Poet

[poetic soul]

I don't deserve you.
Her hand holding my hand so tightly.

such pain.....such despair....such love......
written amazingly...
gr8 job out there...loved reading this....this will go to my favs...

kudos!!!

:) Love,
Krishna

[Star Wolf]

Heartbreaking. It is good that you were there for her to show her she does matter no matter what has happen to her in her life. We all need someone like that in our lives.