What good and bad we do in a life. The scars will always stay with us.
Killer on the road
A Iraqi
man sipping his coffee. He watches the military trucks drive
by.
He look to the sky and murmur a pray. I will
miss you my wife, my children. He caresses his
chest. He feel the bomb wrapped tightly
against his body.
His eyes are
sad and he knows he has no choice. They killed his
brothers. They came to his country and torn it down to
rubble.
He believed in a eye for a
eye. He will be
in paradise soon. Tears fall from his eyes as he think
of his wife sleeping alone.
Soldier with
M-16 loaded and ready. He tells his buddy going to be a
good night. Going to kill a few of them damn
terrorist.
His buddy
with a bible in his hand. Pray to survive the night
without firing his guns. He whisper I
pray I make it through the night. Please lord keep
me safe and let me go home soon.
The city is
quiet and the soldier are on alert. The gunner pass the
coffee to his friends. Tells him my eyes are seeing
ghosts again.
He
watches the morning light began to appear. He thinks of
a mother and father waiting and hoping to see him. He makes a mental note to call them
tomorrow.
A middle age
Iraqi man walked down the street in the early morning. His hands are sweating. He see two
soldiers guarding a government building.
The gunner asks his buddy was the man
a ghost in the distance? He put the bible down and tells
him he is real.
The soldier looked at his bible. Points his
weapon at the man. He raise his hand to halt the Iraqi
Man.
The Iraqi man screams out his
daughter name and Allah. Runs toward the
soldier.
The soldier aim his
M-16 and shoot three rounds into the man
chest.
The Iraqi man falls dead. The soldier
goes to him. Fall and ask god to forgive
him.
He open up
and see the bomb and photos. It still don't bring comfort to the
soldier.
The soldier sit on his cot. He hold
pictures of a man's wife with two children. He wonder why he has to kill this man?
He should of been home tossing
a football with his brother or
something.
He cries for the Iraqi he killed. Old
Sargent said he was a hero. Those terrorist are just
killers on the road. Waiting for us to end their
misery. He
bring his bible to his heart and tries to
sleep.
The gunner wake him up. He tells him
we are on again tonight.
He puts the bible on the table. Dresses into battle gear and walk out of his tent. He leave the bible tonight on the table.
He
had bad dreams. He dreams he was the killer on the road.
He would do his duty and go
home. He don't talk of God or Jesus anymore. He just wishes
for the blood to leave his hands.
The gunner smile. He yelled maybe we
can kill a few tonight. His buddy smile and stare at
the road.
War leave no winner. Vietnam and Korea left scar for a generation of young men and woman. These Wars of today will be the scars for the next 60 years or more.
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Your war stories are so poignant to me...my friend over there, I wonder, how many men has he killed? Will those scars affect him when he's home with his wife and kids? I know they will, but will he realize it, or pass on the violence to those he loves....Great write, my friend.
This is an exceptional piece of work. I think some of the grammatical errors need to be fixed, and I think it would help to have one font for easy reading. But the emotional punch is there because actions always have consequences.
A torrid affair with your past and the relevance it still holds with your presence, i am no one to comment on war of all things, I have never experienced it in real life, so all I can say is my heart las with that man you were, are and will be, a classic born to a world of wrong, my darling you bring tears to my eyes with your words, be dafe and be good.
this poem is blatantly aimed not at hatred for one's enemies, but at the terror of war and the futility of useless death. war is not a solution; it is part of the problem.
i fear men won't learn this until the war makers have to actually suffer the casualties of war, then perhaps they will see the error of their ways? beautiful write!
What a way to live and end life then to carry the memories into the afterlife. Do we ever become so numb from living like this that life no longer has any meaning just as the bible was left on the table do we leave also our humanity with it. Stunning work that reaches deep into our hearts.
This write of your's is very deep. It makes one sympathize even more with the people at the war front. War is never easy and is definitely never the solution. High time the world gets that and retreats the troops!
makes me think of my dad and how lost he is in all the pains he's indured in life he isn't the same man anymore scary he's a stranger to me i pray for him every day he is 57 yrs. old love reading your stories thank you for sharing. god bless lily
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Applause for selecting such a topic and applause again for putting it through so beautifully ... Great work . I believe this should be featured .
wow. if someone has trouble sympathizing with the iraqis, let them read this. it will open up the eyes of anyone who has something bad to say about our men overseas. a fantastic poem!
I rate this poem with those of Sasoon and Owen...war poets must be heard..
Only foul experience, or knowledge of it, can produce such words..
Well done..Coyote...thank you for howling.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
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