Daybreak confession to the Sea

In a life we must add up what we have done. Re-set our journey and begin again.

  Daybreak confession to the Sea


I have reached the bottom of the bottle.
Now distraught and delirious dreams led me to wishing.


I was swimming in your warm sweet kisses.
Desiring steamy long nights of passion  in your embrace.


I have joined the bonafide brethren of men who cradle love in their hands.
And misused the sweet woman.


Now I sit in a abyss of s**t sipping bourbon.
Walking on a tightrope.

I wish for those nights when you came to me in your sexy red negligee.
Your brown eyes taking the weight of the world away.


I try to forget your beautiful face.


I pick-up another shot of whiskey.
Raise the glass up and whisper to a divine and beautiful woman.
Who flee my worthless life.


Daybreak will be merciful.


I sit alone by the sea.
I will calculate how kind and noble you were.


I pray to the God of the Sea.

Sent a Angel to me with beautiful brown eyes.
To bring joy and laughter back into a sad life. 


I'm sorry.


                        Coyote
                       Jan 2009
 
 

Author's Note

A old poem. Wisdom can take a lifetime to learn. If we are lucky. We learn before it is too late.
Coyote

Reviews

[Érenn]

Sorry I have been so busy reading so many writes, I was unable to take out time for reading yours before now. ^^ And wow did I start with an amazing one. I am a teetotaler so for me I wouldn't know how the Bourbon felt. But pretty sure it was just a temporary relief. Heartache and heartbreak is harsh, and you know the sorrows you end up drowning in is worsened when you have lost your way and not willing to get over it.
Umm not sure if this was intentional but in the last couplet you have written a Angel, shouldn't it be an Angel?
Thank you for sharing ^^ Some good advice thrown here for others to learn and follow ^^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. An Angel. Thank you for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[My Fair Lady]

When life experiences push us, bend and break us.. the mended sections become stronger than the inexperienced parts.. ahh.. wisdom. How I enjoy yours.

[Lily Mae]

I often wonder how different life would be if there were a reset button we could only use once... This is a powerful poem full of raw and intense passion. Thank you for sharing..:) x

[Cynthia]

Its a sad poem. Its sure a really hard lesson to learn, but I'm sure after learning it, we sure will learn much more. This poem is beautiful and sad, makes people think, a thoughtful poem :) Thanks for sharing it, it sure help much people, teaching us a lesson...
Great Job!

[Sukriti Suki]

oh I loved this..learning the lesson the hard way in love...we all take up something when mourning, be it drinking, depression, hopelessness...the only thing is we have to see the light and come out of it eventually. Thank you for this write, enjoyed reading every bit of it.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is one of the worst lessons in life to learn.
You write with such heart...it amazes me.
This is a lesson in life..but unfortunately...
there's no lesson like a hard lesson.

[Aidz]

Now I sit in a abyss of s**t sipping bourbon.

Im hearin ya

[DreyaArt]

thats so sad. I have no other words.

[Some Random Person.]

A very good poem... Very good one. Made me think a little... Good!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Alcohol...like all medicine it does s**t to cure the pain of the heart, it's supposed to, but the side-effects (sadness, loneliness, reminiscing) get in the way.

In taquilla there is a worm...did it get there by accident or did it drown itself to get away from feeling the loss of it's lost worm love. one may never know.