Daybreak confession to the Sea

In a life we must add up what we have done. Re-set our journey and begin again.

  Daybreak confession to the Sea


I have reached the bottom of the bottle.
Now distraught and delirious dreams led me to wishing.


I was swimming in your warm sweet kisses.
Desiring steamy long nights of passion  in your embrace.


I have joined the bonafide brethren of men who cradle love in their hands.
And misused the sweet woman.


Now I sit in a abyss of s**t sipping bourbon.
Walking on a tightrope.

I wish for those nights when you came to me in your sexy red negligee.
Your brown eyes taking the weight of the world away.


I try to forget your beautiful face.


I pick-up another shot of whiskey.
Raise the glass up and whisper to a divine and beautiful woman.
Who flee my worthless life.


Daybreak will be merciful.


I sit alone by the sea.
I will calculate how kind and noble you were.


I pray to the God of the Sea.

Sent a Angel to me with beautiful brown eyes.
To bring joy and laughter back into a sad life. 


I'm sorry.


                        Coyote
                       Jan 2009
 
 

Author's Note

A old poem. Wisdom can take a lifetime to learn. If we are lucky. We learn before it is too late.
Coyote

Reviews

[Érenn]

Sorry I have been so busy reading so many writes, I was unable to take out time for reading yours before now. ^^ And wow did I start with an amazing one. I am a teetotaler so for me I wouldn't know how the Bourbon felt. But pretty sure it was just a temporary relief. Heartache and heartbreak is harsh, and you know the sorrows you end up drowning in is worsened when you have lost your way and not willing to get over it.
Umm not sure if this was intentional but in the last couplet you have written a Angel, shouldn't it be an Angel?
Thank you for sharing ^^ Some good advice thrown here for others to learn and follow ^^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. An Angel. Thank you for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[brenda]

ohh love just like romeo says well kida but he says like this love is a fume full of sighs if its not right then still u get the point and nice tip is sometimes hard to forget someone and to wait for that person to makes you happy but u have to have patience nice awesome poem!!:)

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Sweet Reminiscence :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Fierce and unyielding, some of your best work

[Ice QueenJen]

Sad, yet beautifully touching!

[Star Wolf]

A very sad and very emotional poem. Such deep sadness and regret can drive us to do destructive things while we swim in the guilt and self hate of those horribly pain filled emotions. A excellent write.

[futurepast.]

This poem really speaks out the words of sadness. The thoughts of someone drifting away, and being in the present wishing that person was here is really heart breaking.
Beautifully penned ..

[A.G Franke]

nice! I like the "you don't know what you go till it's gone!" always a good lesson! and ye also how alchohol can affect you! good work!

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a sad story but one that was detailed. Losing someone we held dear isn't easy and when a lover walks away it makes us reflect on what has happened. Drinking never helps us figure it out even though it sounds like a good idea. I like the ending of this poem very much.

[SamBug]

I enjoyed reading this so much. Thanks for sharing. You did awesome.

[KAREN]

A sad poem, and a hard way to learn and gain wisdom. Wll done!