Daybreak confession to the Sea

In a life we must add up what we have done. Re-set our journey and begin again.

  Daybreak confession to the Sea


I have reached the bottom of the bottle.
Now distraught and delirious dreams led me to wishing.


I was swimming in your warm sweet kisses.
Desiring steamy long nights of passion  in your embrace.


I have joined the bonafide brethren of men who cradle love in their hands.
And misused the sweet woman.


Now I sit in a abyss of s**t sipping bourbon.
Walking on a tightrope.

I wish for those nights when you came to me in your sexy red negligee.
Your brown eyes taking the weight of the world away.


I try to forget your beautiful face.


I pick-up another shot of whiskey.
Raise the glass up and whisper to a divine and beautiful woman.
Who flee my worthless life.


Daybreak will be merciful.


I sit alone by the sea.
I will calculate how kind and noble you were.


I pray to the God of the Sea.

Sent a Angel to me with beautiful brown eyes.
To bring joy and laughter back into a sad life. 


I'm sorry.


                        Coyote
                       Jan 2009
 
 

Author's Note

A old poem. Wisdom can take a lifetime to learn. If we are lucky. We learn before it is too late.
Coyote

Reviews

[Érenn]

Sorry I have been so busy reading so many writes, I was unable to take out time for reading yours before now. ^^ And wow did I start with an amazing one. I am a teetotaler so for me I wouldn't know how the Bourbon felt. But pretty sure it was just a temporary relief. Heartache and heartbreak is harsh, and you know the sorrows you end up drowning in is worsened when you have lost your way and not willing to get over it.
Umm not sure if this was intentional but in the last couplet you have written a Angel, shouldn't it be an Angel?
Thank you for sharing ^^ Some good advice thrown here for others to learn and follow ^^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. An Angel. Thank you for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[Holiday Sparkle]

very nice.

[Joiedevivre]

This is an immense poem, so beautiful the sensitivity of man when he lets slip. So powerful and deep and nourishing.
So many good parts i love I'd have to highlight most of the poem.
I hope she read this.....

[Mark]

Just from the title I knew this one must involve drinking. I like the peaceful element of healing that the sea gives even if the remeniscing is painful the sea always helps. It helps the poem too.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Brillance lives here, in this wisdom. Wonderful, wonderful job.

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is a wonderful poem soo keep it up

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wonderful expression.....!!!!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I can feel that hurt, of walking that tightrope. Taking desire but unable to return the need but feeling the lose. Excellent poem my friend.

[Jake Staffeld]

The sad affect of screwing up the thing we most need. It can be enough to drive one to extremes, and these just make things worse in the end.

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in life sometimes we don't know what we have until it's gone! I really like this thought provoking piece.

[T.W. Early]

passion! passion! passion! very vivid poem! another hit poem.