Daybreak confession to the Sea

In a life we must add up what we have done. Re-set our journey and begin again.

  Daybreak confession to the Sea


I have reached the bottom of the bottle.
Now distraught and delirious dreams led me to wishing.


I was swimming in your warm sweet kisses.
Desiring steamy long nights of passion  in your embrace.


I have joined the bonafide brethren of men who cradle love in their hands.
And misused the sweet woman.


Now I sit in a abyss of s**t sipping bourbon.
Walking on a tightrope.

I wish for those nights when you came to me in your sexy red negligee.
Your brown eyes taking the weight of the world away.


I try to forget your beautiful face.


I pick-up another shot of whiskey.
Raise the glass up and whisper to a divine and beautiful woman.
Who flee my worthless life.


Daybreak will be merciful.


I sit alone by the sea.
I will calculate how kind and noble you were.


I pray to the God of the Sea.

Sent a Angel to me with beautiful brown eyes.
To bring joy and laughter back into a sad life. 


I'm sorry.


                        Coyote
                       Jan 2009
 
 

Author's Note

A old poem. Wisdom can take a lifetime to learn. If we are lucky. We learn before it is too late.
Coyote

Reviews

[Érenn]

Sorry I have been so busy reading so many writes, I was unable to take out time for reading yours before now. ^^ And wow did I start with an amazing one. I am a teetotaler so for me I wouldn't know how the Bourbon felt. But pretty sure it was just a temporary relief. Heartache and heartbreak is harsh, and you know the sorrows you end up drowning in is worsened when you have lost your way and not willing to get over it.
Umm not sure if this was intentional but in the last couplet you have written a Angel, shouldn't it be an Angel?
Thank you for sharing ^^ Some good advice thrown here for others to learn and follow ^^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. An Angel. Thank you for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

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[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Carissa Marie]

Love lost but wanting to be found again. Your words are always beautiful. Raw, sad, beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Carissa. I appreciate the kind words.

[jeannemarie coulter]

lovely apology to a love lost...well done

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the comment.

[no.cristeaux]

Jeez. The lines are so simple and short but filled with so much raw emotion. A true literary artist.

k.k.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[John Anderson]

This is a beautiful piece and evokes many images

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.

[Lyn Anderson]

What a powerful and sensitive piece. Two very, and I stress MINOR corrections: Fourth stanza AN abyss, and 7th stanza, FLEES. I love the tone, quality, and emotion of your writing. You do a beautiful job of analyzing the world and man's foibles with your poetry.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the help and reading. I do appreciate.

[Lyn Anderson]

You are very welcome. 700 plus views and no one said anything? You don't seem like a scary guy to me:)

[lawrence bear]

this was moving, funny how we turn to the bottle when we are distraught, but deeply we think it will never hurt us, the brown bottled friend. But sometimes, it does more damage than good. Be well my friend, stay strong. Thanks for sharing a piece of your soul.

[Coyote Poetry]

I quit drinking in bars years ago. Four kids change the priority of life. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[AlieahRose]

YOUR POETRY AND...
STORIES ALWAYS LEAVE...
ME THINKING ABOUT...
MY OWN LIFE...
I ADMIRE THAT...
GREAT JOB COYOTE...

I've visited that bottle of JW black~~