Twisted City      Part three

Twisted City Part three

A Chapter by Coyote Poetry
"

Jesus said when a man who offered a hand to help a child. Will be a honor quest at his table.

"

  Twisted City part 3

              (Death can come from a Angel/Demon with a smile and a goodbye)



Beatrice layed in his arms.
Coyote watched her sleep.
He doesn't sleep too much lately.

A vision appeared in his dreams of a brown hair woman.
 She is looking for him with real desperation.

She would become his student and his killer.
 He tried to sleep as the morning light appears in the window.


He wake up and he smelled bacon and eggs cooking.
He goes to Beatrice and wrapped his arms around her.
 
She asked how long are you staying?
 He whisper three days.

She smiles and don't complain.
She like her private time.
 And now had a stable of writers and poets who keeps her busy.


She asked  "When was going on book tour?
 Are you going to do some poetry readings? "

"Your readers going to think you are dead
if you don't make a appearance soon. "

H
e told her. " I will go on book tour in the fall. "

She smile and never question where he was or going.
 She told him. "You must be in Seattle in 10 day for your new book opening. "
Coyote smiles and kissed her.


The three days go quickly.
 
He kissed her goodbye and go to his old Dakota truck.
Beatrice insured the truck is always ready with basic maintenance.
Coyote turned the key and the truck sound quiet and ready to go.


 He looked up and Beatrice is waving goodbye.
He tossed her a kiss and gets on the road.


He arrived in Portland and parked the truck in a parking structure.
He didn't know why he had to be here  today.
He had a gut feeling he had a purpose to be in Portland today. 

He walked to a coffee shop and a young girl asked. 
  "Honey can I help you? "
He ordered a coffee and the breakfast special.


A young couple sat close by.
Coyote saw bruises on her face.

She was barely nineteen years old.

She looked beat down and tire.

She was holding a child close to her.

The man with her was speaking loud and told her. 
"  I will kill her and the baby if you left me."
 He reached over and slapped her.

She hid her face. Hiding the red mark on her face.


Coyote falled into a memory of a good friend.
She was beautiful.
 She loved him and was a good friends for many years.
 
She met a man who abused her.
She told him don't do anything to him.

He will get better.

He got a call. He went and saw her for the last time.

She was so cold in the basement of the Hospital

He had to arrange her funeral.  .

He paid for her funeral and the man paid for his sins.

He had a bad death.


He awoke. 


Coyote heard the girl crying.
 She asked him. "Please  let me go.
Please let me leave? "

He told her. " I will kill you first."
 He slapped her a second time.

Coyote reached over and touched his shoulder.
 He whispered. " I will brake your arm if you hit her again."


The man  stood up and  told the woman. " Go home now. "
He tossed 5 dollars on the table and followed the woman.

Coyote get up and tossed 20 dollars on the table and follow the couple.

They go into a old apartment building a few blocks away..

Coyote saw a sub shop across the street.
He goes to it.
 
A young red head say. "Hi Honey. 
 What can I get you?"
 He ordered a sub and a coffee.

He would wait for the woman to appear.
 It wasn't long. 

She goes to the sub shop and order food  then to the liquor store.
She returned and the waitress goes to her.
She falled into her arms.
 The waitress told her to call the police.
 
She told her. " They won't do a damn thing.
He will kill me one day."
She goes back to her apartment.


The waitress come to Coyote.

Refilled his coffee.

  He asked her. "Was everything Ok? "

She sat down with him and told him. " Jennifer was the sweetest
and happiest girl in the neighborhood."

" He will kill her one day and no-one will give a s**t."
 
He asked  "Why won't she call the police? "
She told him. " They came 3 or 4 times already and did nothing."
 
The waitress come close and spoke quietly.
" I would kill that b*****d myself if I could."
 
Coyote asked. "Why can't she
leave? "

The young waitress said my name was Laura.
She told him the girl  father is a preacher in Ohio.

She don't want to bring this problem to him.


  He asked. "What is his name?
 She smiled and told him. "His name is  like the president Samuel Adams."


Coyote waits until she appeared again.
She goes to Laura and asked to borrow twenty dollars to buy whiskey.
 So when Paul woke up he would be happy.

 Coyote goes to her and he asked. " How have you been Jennifer?
 I'm a friend of your father.
 Are you Ok? "

Jennifer mind been so screwed up she didn't know this man.
She told him. " I don't remember you? "

Coyote smile and told her. "It been a long time and   can I help you?
Have you talk to your father in Ohio?"


Jennifer laughs and told him.  "If you can buy me and my baby a plane ticket.
 Give me a lot of money.
 You can? "

Coyote smiles and told her that isn't a problem.


They go into the apartment.
 Paul is passed out.
 
He told her. " Get the diaper bag and he would buy whatever she needed. "
They go to the sub shop and called a taxi.

Laura came to them and kiss Jennifer goodbye and thanking Coyote.
He puts four $50 bills in her hands.


At the airport Jennifer called her father.
He asked to speak to Coyote.
The father said. " I don't know you."
 
"But I owe you my life for bringing my baby girl my granddaughter  back home."


Jennifer looked Coyote in the eyes.
"I know you are a stranger and I'm  thankful. Why are you helping me?"

Coyote look away and whispered..  "Some debts are done for many reasons. I have my reasons. Today I want to save you."

She kissed his forehead and walked toward the plane. 

He called her back and puts a envelope in her hand.
"This will help you begin anew.
 Please don't let anyone hurt you again."
 
In her seat she open the envelope and founds fifty $100.00 dollars bills with a note.

"You are safe now and remember the past is to  remind us to be strong and never allow anyone to hurt you again. "


In the Taxi the song sang in his head.

"So much to do, no time to do it.
So much to do. No time to do it."

He arrived and gets drops off a few blocks away from the apartment.

He walked into the apartment.
At the door he is standing.

 Paul is yelling. " Where you been b***h?
 I will kill you next time you take off without my permission.
Where is my whiskey?"
 
Coyote goes and shoot the needle into side of his neck.
Paul can't move.
 He yelled. "What did you do?"

Coyote  sang lowly.
"So much to do. No time to do it.
So much to do. No time to do it."


Paul face changed when he faces Coyote.

Coyote goes to the door and locked all the deadbolts.
He dragged Paul to the center of the floor.

 
Paul begin to beg for forgiveness.
 
Coyote put his face close and whisper.
  "Do you want to dance with the devil?
You like pain?
You will find hell on earth before I'm finished."

He goes to the kitchen and find a 2 pound head hammer.


He told Paul.
"It is skill to keep a man alive when you slowly break every bone in his body."

 Coyote began with the feet. Hitting each foot with force.

Paul wanted to scream but the drug stop the ability to yell.

He break the bones in the knees next.

Paul  tried to pass out. Coyote goes to the kitchen.

Pour water on Paul's face. He awoke to a smiling Coyote.

He pound the  fingers then the elbows.
After three hours Paul is falling in and out of a coma.
 
He  goes to his head and twist till he can hear the neck breaking.


The police called Tiffany early in the morning.
 
When she arrived a group  of reporters were hanging around.
She knew it must be a mess for interest in a drunk.

She walked in and see Paul laying in pieces.
 She turned away.

A young police officer report he was torture for hours.
 
"Who would do this? "

She said." I don't know if I would want to meet the man who could do this?"
 
She asked the officer anyone see anything?
 He direct her to Laura across the street.


Laura told her about a old man who was here drinking coffee this morning.
 
Tiffany asked how old was the man?

 Laura smile and tells her.
  " I think about eighty and couldn't walk too good."



Tiffany asked where is the girlfriend.?


Laura smile and look into the eyes of Tiffany.

"She is in a better place."


Tiffany smile for she heard the serial killer was big and black. 
He was young and strong.
Now old and can't walk.

She adviced Laura. " You can go to jail for not telling the truth."
 
Laura asked. "Did Paul suffer? "

Tiffany asked. "Would you feel better if he did?"
 
Laura said. "I wish only that I did it along time ago."


 Coyote dream were getting worst.
He felt the  woman close to him.

His dreams now are filled with old Naguals around him telling him to stop.
 He knew he lost control and now he needed to kill.


He pray to the gods of life and death allow me to go home to Mt. Olympic to heal.


                                    Coyote

 

 

 

 

 
 


© 2011 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Life is a fair journey. Good deeds will lead you to good people. Any help would be appreciated.

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Whew John, I did not expect this kind of a write from you. Knowing how I feel about abuse, I would hope that any one in this situation call the police and say they want to press charges against the abuser. Then when he is taken away, run like heck. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


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This is my baby. I have finished the book. Years ago. I wrote in four days. I need to re-write and m.. read more



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Another beautiful chapter. You write very good and I like this a lot.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Another amazing chapter...it has me a little speechless. A very powerful write.. xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, here's the bone breaking. A suitable death for scum like him. Another great chapter. :D

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Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is like the old sayings, every law is meant to be broken... Are there times when all the deadly sins are allowed to be broken? When pain and suffering can be ended by one other who is not in pain and suffering? Is it ok to steal if you are hungry? Is it ok to kill if you will be killed (or someone else)? Is it ok to lie to protect a "saint?" Is it ok to be angry if the reason is just? Is it ok to eat your fill and beyond if you don't know when your next meal is? Is it ok to judge when you know you are already going to Hell? A person can't buy his or her way into Heaven but can a person buy his or her way into Hell?

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Posted 14 Years Ago


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Few corrections:
Not insure - change to ensures
Take off the question mark on: breakfast special?
sit close bye. should be sits close by.
On this line it should be her name not my - The young waitress said my name was Laura.
Go back in and capitalize Laura's name throughout the piece.
Chilling story. You have a good book here Coyote. Vigilante justice with a serial killer with a conscious.


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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Please do not make this the end i admire this piece. the vigilant justice is a beautiful tale to express and i adore it

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Posted 14 Years Ago


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Third chapter read twice .. my goodness, I feel numb.

All of this writing is dark, dark, like an awful earthly nightmare. Man walking the world revenging the pain done to women, the gentle sex .. and yet his own actions via the long torture is almost gratifying to him ,, not sure if maybe he's wrapped in hate rather than gallantry.

This is an extraordinary story told in your own special style and I 'love' it for its raw language .. frightening though it is. Maybe that very last line explains how Coyote if feeling .. wanting his own death, knowing what he's become.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


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"Beatrice insure the truck is always ready with basic maintence." Wasn't quite sure what to make of that line, might be something to look at.
"He whisper I will brake your arm if you hit her again." I think you want "break" here.
Those were the two things I wanted to point out, nothing too major beyond that. Still suggest checking out the tenses, at least for clarity sake. Reads beautifully regardless.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Coyote must have some special gift to sense when women are in trouble. He is a mystery. Enjoyed your story.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a great story. It's quite intense. It's hard to stop reading once you get started. Fantastic!

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