we all are saddened when lovers disappear; we feel lost and forgotten…….that there is hope in this piece….we as people, need assurance that we are indeed loved forever, a type of security blanket……lovely story, dear John
Warmly, B🌷
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Thank you dear Betty for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
True love is a mystical experience and when we lose it, it can feel as though we have indeed lost everything. But then one day, we find the mystical again and realize the past love was to prepare you for this one. Beautiful penning. John:)
Is this a poem about death separating the lovers? Or of love gone stale? Either way it’s beautiful and I can feel the longing and lost words between lovers
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Separation. I was a career soldier. Never staying long enough to create roots. Thank you for readin.. read moreSeparation. I was a career soldier. Never staying long enough to create roots. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
we all are saddened when lovers disappear; we feel lost and forgotten…….that there is hope in this piece….we as people, need assurance that we are indeed loved forever, a type of security blanket……lovely story, dear John
Warmly, B🌷
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Thank you dear Betty for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
We say things to our lover with all the love in our hearts at the time, but life happens are they are not fulfilled as we thought they would be. Sometimes forever can be for an hour, a day, a week, a month or a year, it is very difficult to know how long forever lasts in the human world, dear J... A very beautiful romantic, sweet, warm and tender write from your poetic pen. Thank you so very much for sharing. Lovely work, dear J...
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Thank you dear Marie. I agree. A second of love is better than none.
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