Do more..

Last poem for November 2024.

Do more..

1- I was blindsided by her.

Her eyes, bright and demanding.

I asked her. What do you need my lovely?

She gave me a devilish smile and she told me.

Give me some more my love. Make me feel I am alive.

2- Intoxication..

I told her, you have the most kissable lips, I ever seen.

She looked at me with interesting eyes and she asked me.

We drink, we do the Texas two-step in Belton every Friday and Saturday.

We befriended each other because we like the whiskey and the music.

Now you believe you deserve a kiss?

I told dear Elena. My Texas beauty.

Kisses are gifts. They are honored gifts.

She smiled and she kissed him. Leaving lipstick of red on my lips.

She asked him. Was it a good kiss Johnnie?

He told her. The greatest kiss, I ever been given.

Thank you dear Elena.

She asked him. Now you will want more kisses?

He told her. Yes beautiful Elena.

Maybe a million more?

Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Marina]

I like the way the poem is served in two parts; the initial section where she asks to be desired and the second section where his romantic words lead to him seeking the kisses he desires. Sometimes we need to remind those we love that they are indeed loved and cherished. Our reward is unlimited displays of affection.

It’s a very romantic writing, Coyote. I hope you did reach the million kisses mark.❤️

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too dear Marina. Hello dear friend and thank you for reading and the comment. Good morning from cold and chilly Michigan.

[Chris Shaw]

Kisses sweeter than wine. Once tasted, can’t be resisted. More beautiful romantic moments here Coyote, to be savored. Just lovely.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Chris for reading and the comment. I do appreciate. The kind and sweet kisses. Will stay with us always.

[Red Brick Keshner]

The kiss, that’s what blindsides and intoxicates!

[Coyote Poetry]

I do remember the kisses in my old age. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[Ken Simm.]

There is nobody who does these better.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ken for the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Betty Hermelee]

Hi Dear John
Nothing like Whiskey and kisses...obviously you were very attracted to her stunning eyes, yet the lips gives passion to the scene....she wanted to know if the kisses were good; I think you said yes without hesitation....another one of your very romantic encounters, but the whiskey makes it a bit more passionate
Lovely as usual John
Warmly, B

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Betty. I was young once. Now my life seem like another person tale.

[Betty Hermelee]

That's okay, so does mine!!!
AS always, B

[Neville]

A million more kisses should just about do it and each one a gift .. Elena sounds quite a lass & clearly knew what she wanted back in the day .. Who say's romance is dead eh' .. You just proved them all wrong all along Coyote .. Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Neville. Old school romance is forgotten. New world going too fast. Need dating, dancing and talking. Become friends.

[Neville]

My pleasure Coyote 👍

[The Diamond Effect]

Your words are still so beautiful and well written, I always look forward to your writings!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Diamond Dunbar. I appreciate the comment and the kind words.

[John the Baptist]

By God, C., you don't waste any time. Which came first, the kiss or her name?

[Coyote Poetry]

I was young and brave once my friend. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Pryde Foltz]

A charming piece of romance, John. I can see them dancing away the evening:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to dance, good to laugh and very good to know many kisses. Thank you dear Pryde for reading and the comment.

[D. Mansfield]

Very nice, I couldn't help wondering if Belton was in missouri.

[Coyote Poetry]

I was station at Fort Hood, Texas. Down the road a few miles. Belton, Texas. Very kind people and the best dance hall near.

[D. Mansfield]

I worked all over Texas in early 80s as a shooter on a seismegraph crew exploring for oil. Right out of high-school working g 30 days on 7off 120hours a week. On break we had so much money we couldn't spend it. And for an 28yr old shooting explosives all day. . . I'd have paid them