Poetry for dear Cheryl..

Trying to awake my sleeping mind.

Poetry for dear Cheryl..

1- We were leftover people and we became so damn lost.

We sought each other to seek and know comfort and

we didn’t know. We forgot kindness, we became ghost in a ugly world.

Now I drink alone, now I seek silence nights.

Now I dance alone and I remember you.

Our last words you spoke to me.

Only whiskey had not broke my heart, love had killed my soul.

I pray dear Cheryl.

You a found a better place.

2- One more glass of beer, one more shot of whiskey, we were.

We would hide in dark motels and

try to use up everything we had left.

I told her. Maybe we need silence, maybe we need more kisses?

I remember her glances of hello, I remember her glances of

demanding kisses. I wonder did I try to see her sadness?

Dear Cheryl, you taught me to want more.

You taught me to swim in delight and you taught me.

Life isn’t kind to us.

Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Very emotional and sad …. Relationships are difficult as you allude to this… it takes so much work, to make things right all the time…. Even when love is thick.. stuck together a beautiful tribute John, and I love the music as well
Warmly, B🌷

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Betty and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate. I hope you are doing well and enjoying the days of Autumn.

[Betty Hermelee]

my pleasure John🌷
warmly, B

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

this is a sad and moody song. yet your way of telling is both personal and universal. many have loved and lost like this. many have sufferred as you do. yet your sufferring is entirely yours. beer, shots of whiskey, dark motels... only you knew how they tasted, what that looked like. the way you subtly weaved these images into a story oft told was very intimate. the final line really resonated too. it was a well-crafted piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ernest. More sad people than happy. I believe some people enjoy the sadness. I appreciate the comment.

[Pryde Foltz]

Cuts like a knife, I believe Bryan Adams refrained. One side so smooth and shiny and the other sharp. A beautiful and wistful telling, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Pryde. I appreciate the comment my friend.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Another profound explanation of our humanity.

Winston

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Winston. I appreciate the comment.

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl..]

I can feel the emotions through this, Love the song as well as your words

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear poet for reading and the kind words. I love the old song too.

[Red Brick Keshner]

A touching tribute and memorial. At least we know witness she is no longer “left over.”

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I appreciate the comment.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Powerful. You bring the scene to life.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Thomas. I appreciate the comment.

[Sean M. Addams]

Wow!! Lots of emotions in this one. Overall I felt your did a great job. Love reading your work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello Sean. I appreciate the comment.

[Lydia Shutter]

When two people have lost those they love, finding solace in each other's arms is often a solution. Still, it is almost impossible to fill the emptiness left. So emotional and honest, John. Good write. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Lydia. I agree my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[red93]

This is Fabulous Work Coyote - your yearning for Cheryl expressed masterfully, and I love that unresolved ending. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.