'She told me,
we have said enough words.
Please allow the silence of us
to find places,
where we were once kind to each other.'
Your words are both gentle and sincere throughout, John. There is a spiritual feel to this where something far, far higher than lust holds a forever genuine memory. Perhaps the best of your best.
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Hello dear Emma. I appreciate the comment my friend.
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You are very welcome. Hope your day is beautiful. Sun bright and warm here, today.
The death of love...
Sounds like a couple of lovers saying goodbye for the last time.
Very much enjoyed reading this piece.
Well done friend.
Keep it up! Take good care.
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Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
'She told me,
we have said enough words.
Please allow the silence of us
to find places,
where we were once kind to each other.'
Your words are both gentle and sincere throughout, John. There is a spiritual feel to this where something far, far higher than lust holds a forever genuine memory. Perhaps the best of your best.
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6 Months Ago
Hello dear Emma. I appreciate the comment my friend.
6 Months Ago
You are very welcome. Hope your day is beautiful. Sun bright and warm here, today.
I feel that the darkness is there because the love is gone. All that we need, the soft touch, the gentle kiss are gone, and all that we have left is the awaiting for the final end.
Take care - Dave
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I agree Dave and thank you for reading and the comment.
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I'm glad to see you. I hope and pray that all is well with you. Take care - Dave
two lovers who need kindness and love, inevitably face the darkness that come at the end of life...."today we laid in the darkness"..." lovers bleed out in their last emotions"... a thoughtful and melancholic write John, thanks for sharing... I enjoyed it, ....
Warmly, B
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Thank you dear Betty for reading and the comment. Saying goodbye is never easy.
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I know, it the worst…. But we still have the memories… my pleasure John
Warmly, B
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
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