Love does demand a lot of give and take...perhaps a bit of greediness is in the mix as well. Pretty words are lovely to read, but the conversations between lovers must also be truthful. Hell bound....hmmmm....not sure that is true, but you have to live your life as you see fit without worrying about what happens next. I think you have paid plenty to have love in your life. Your poetry is always so romantic. Lydi**
Posted 7 Months Ago
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7 Months Ago
Thank you dear Lydia for reading and the kind words. Love needs two people wanting the same things. .. read moreThank you dear Lydia for reading and the kind words. Love needs two people wanting the same things. Hard to find sometimes.
Love can be special and love can be mean. Seems like everything emotional, can come and go, whether one wants that or not. For the heart on one's sleeve kind of being, wanting, needing and loving comes at the sane time - as it does for you, sir.. . take it when the two seeks something special. For others love can be a brief essential or wanted familiarity that could be, might be, special.. it depends on how the cards are dealt, perhaps!
Posted 7 Months Ago
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7 Months Ago
I agree dear Emma. I believe women decide love or not. Thank you dear friend for reading and the com.. read moreI agree dear Emma. I believe women decide love or not. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.
i love your dancing words Coyote Man ... what you capture and share is cut right to the chase .. thanks for sharing my friend
E.
ps. really like the song and video!
Posted 7 Months Ago
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7 Months Ago
Good to be young and foolish once. I appreciate the comment my friend.
Love does demand a lot of give and take...perhaps a bit of greediness is in the mix as well. Pretty words are lovely to read, but the conversations between lovers must also be truthful. Hell bound....hmmmm....not sure that is true, but you have to live your life as you see fit without worrying about what happens next. I think you have paid plenty to have love in your life. Your poetry is always so romantic. Lydi**
Posted 7 Months Ago
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7 Months Ago
Thank you dear Lydia for reading and the kind words. Love needs two people wanting the same things. .. read moreThank you dear Lydia for reading and the kind words. Love needs two people wanting the same things. Hard to find sometimes.
Foot loose and fancy free came to mind John. But also two people can be toxic to each other as well, just not a good mix no matter how you shake it. nice write John.
Posted 8 Months Ago
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7 Months Ago
Thank you Andrew for reading and the comment. Good to be young and seeking more life.
you can't win in this world...it seems she kissed you and tossed you out...a rather bitter scene with a bit of mystery in it..but you always manage to smooth it over with a glass of whiskey...I believe greediness is in our nature,...however in a relationship greed should not even be a word.... well written in your inimitable
style John....
Warmly, B
Posted 8 Months Ago
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8 Months Ago
Thank you dear Betty for reading and the comment. I like the words of John Donne. "We do not find lo.. read moreThank you dear Betty for reading and the comment. I like the words of John Donne. "We do not find love. Love will find us." A rare opportunity in a long life. I appreciate the comment.
Once you feared my kiss and now you demand more.
Are we greedy?
Or did we learn, Love demand great payment.
We cannot pay.
LOVED this part, this is quite intriguing really, much enjoyed the read
Posted 8 Months Ago
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8 Months Ago
Thank you dear friend for reading and the kind words. I am a old man now. I appreciate the kindness .. read moreThank you dear friend for reading and the kind words. I am a old man now. I appreciate the kindness of women in my memory.
Dear, Cayote Poetry.
Loved the video. Pretty blond.
I love the whole sound.
The poem speaks to me, a lot. A love one sided. Because a woman loves stronger in the end,
and I love the line that I most painstakingly, "we don't pretty words" great poem!
----1809 Black Plague December
The singer. Best female guitar player today and she can sing. Thank you for reading and the comment.
8 Months Ago
You are most welcome. I kept thinking much, she fell in love with you, and her heart thrown black t.. read moreYou are most welcome. I kept thinking much, she fell in love with you, and her heart thrown black threaded was not so use to affection, and it bequest a great, Conquest, :)- have a great one, I'm going out a little while. :)
8 Months Ago
You are most welcome. I kept thinking much, she fell in love with you, and her heart thrown black t.. read moreYou are most welcome. I kept thinking much, she fell in love with you, and her heart thrown black threaded was not so use to affection, and it bequest a great, Conquest, :)- have a great one, I'm going out a little while. :)
Ah! I missed these words for a long! Just love your style as always. How are you, my friend? I took a break from writerscafe for almost two years. I hope you're doing well.
- mou.
Posted 8 Months Ago
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8 Months Ago
Good to have you back and thank you for reading and the comment my friend.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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