1- The warm days of Summer are holding on. The grandchildren want to swim in Lake St. Clair and to enjoy the warm days of Autumn. The leave are turning and Halloween is coming. The kind days of September. I do love.
2- I have learn. Life is like the four seasons. We must survive Winter and re-plant new flowers into the Spring soil. Life is lesson and more lessons. Today I remember my grandfather words. Please Johnnie, lead with concern, kindness and love.
Yes dear John, the "warm day of summer are hanging on"... so tight it barely feels like fall, but it is!!! i like the way you composed this poem in two parts...how wonderful it is for the grand kids, etc and part two is about learning the change of seasons and adjusting to them; and what you learned about kindness and love from you grandfather. Nice write my friend....
Warmly, B
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Thank you dear Betty for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
This is such a sincere and deeply thought piece of writing, John. Every seasons has its special blessing. Autumn is beautiful, offers vibrant colours in spite of starting a year's gradual fading. Your grandfather has obviously passed his wisdom to you, sir.
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He did dear Emma and thank you for reading and the comment.
hey my brother I just got back from Monterey , the seals had storm the beaches the morning was foggy and cold with mist to boot, but later sun would tell just another day in the cannery. enjoy reading your work, thank you for sharing
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I wish I was with you. Next May. I will return to Monterey. Thank you Mauricio for reading and the c.. read moreI wish I was with you. Next May. I will return to Monterey. Thank you Mauricio for reading and the comment.
Yes dear John, the "warm day of summer are hanging on"... so tight it barely feels like fall, but it is!!! i like the way you composed this poem in two parts...how wonderful it is for the grand kids, etc and part two is about learning the change of seasons and adjusting to them; and what you learned about kindness and love from you grandfather. Nice write my friend....
Warmly, B
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Thank you dear Betty for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Thank you Jacob. I agree my friend. We must listen to our mentors. Could make our journey less painf.. read moreThank you Jacob. I agree my friend. We must listen to our mentors. Could make our journey less painful.
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