1- The warm days of Summer are holding on. The grandchildren want to swim in Lake St. Clair and to enjoy the warm days of Autumn. The leave are turning and Halloween is coming. The kind days of September. I do love.
2- I have learn. Life is like the four seasons. We must survive Winter and re-plant new flowers into the Spring soil. Life is lesson and more lessons. Today I remember my grandfather words. Please Johnnie, lead with concern, kindness and love.
Yes dear John, the "warm day of summer are hanging on"... so tight it barely feels like fall, but it is!!! i like the way you composed this poem in two parts...how wonderful it is for the grand kids, etc and part two is about learning the change of seasons and adjusting to them; and what you learned about kindness and love from you grandfather. Nice write my friend....
Warmly, B
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Thank you dear Betty for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
"The kind days of September" I like this alot, and your Grandfather rubbed of on you my friend, you write with kindness, concern and love, and that is amazing. Thank you
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I appreciate the comment my friend and thank you for reading.
You make a good point, C. Life has its seasons that come and go and then repeat in the next year. It is more like a circle than a straight line, which has a beginning, middle and end and that's it. The seasons are one way life has of telling us it's eternal.
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I agree my friend. Thank you for reading and the comment.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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