You are on my mind..

You are on my mind..

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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For Holly Troy. Amazing person and writer.

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You are on my mind...
1- I am drifting toward you my lovely dancing lady.
I watched your feet move with the music and
I see the happiness in your eyes.
You smiled and waved me to come to you.
I go to you and you whisper to me.
If you don't join the dance,
you can't fall into the music.
2- I told her.
Dear Holly Troy,
you are on my mind, always.
You make me want to seek the sea,
you make me want to put my bare feet in the flowing river.
You make want to free climb the California fault line,
seeking hidden waterfalls and the free hawks.
You make me believe, love is kind and life can be good.
You are softness in my hard world.
Thank you Holly Troy.
I do adore you..
Dancing Coyote

© 2023 Coyote Poetry


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If you don't join the dance,
you can't fall into the music.

These words held me...The dance must begin for the music to make sense. The rest of us falls into rhythm, I loved the energy of this poem. The willingness to climb mountains, seek hidden waterfalls for the sake of love. Indeed, one feels like living life to the fullest when love hits us and holds us captive.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear Divya. To enjoy life. We must become a part of life.
AYVID N

1 Year Ago

Indeed, dear Coyote. You're so right.



Reviews

Hellos, Dear, Cayote Poetry,
I love the innocence of the poem.
It is a winning heart for me, because it is like watching
the best romantic story and seeing the dance for 2 when
it was 1 - . Great write!
----Mayanrd James Keenan

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Thank you Mayanrd for reading and the good comment. I do appreciate.
1809 Black Plague December

1 Year Ago

most welcome Dear,
Fabulous Write - full of creative energy - emotion recollected in tranquility - powerful stuff ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Amazing write again
Your writing takes me into your memory

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

The singer in the song. Is Holly Troy, poet and naturist . I didn't know. Now she dances and paints,.. read more
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

1 Year Ago

Thanks 🙏
Take care
Yes what we bring to the dance is two different steps. Another enjoyable piece John.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Thank you Andrew and I agree.
Softness in this hard world. We all do need of it. Greatly written my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear Sarah for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Holly Troy seems to have been some woman. I mean, not all ladies make one want to climb the California fault line. I hope you didn't let her go.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Hello my friend. Just a poet friend on another site. Now she is a painter, dancing, teaches meditati.. read more
Repetition really works well to hold these lines together and paints a lovely picture.

Winston

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Thank you Winston.
Awww... That's just so sweet.

Very sweet Coyote. The girls deserve it!!!

Keep it up!!!

;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.
That was a beautiful love poem that show the lengths you will go to prove your love for this wonderful dancing lady.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Thank you Will. A talented lady. Good to have a life with many journeys.
Energized and happy. Holly Troy knew how to enjoy life. You have to participate and not let the world go by. Some people have the ability to take others with them. They radiate joy. Who would not want to join in. Beautiful poetry Coyote.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

She still does. The song with the video is her song. She is a writer on another site dear Chris. Now.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

I’ll listen to the song my friend. Thank you.

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