Naked ladies and the roses.

Some mini-poetry for Big Sur and Port Austin...

Naked ladies and the roses..

1- When I hold you tightly and we dance near the Big Sur sea.

The sun kissed our faces and we enthralled in the miracle of love kindness.

I whispered to you. Darling, honey, sweetheart.

Thank you for the dance and I love you so.

2- I told her. Scars, lies and sour wine. We shall know, we can drown in.

Please come with me to the Lake Huron on a Summer day.

At Port Austin, we will sit on the end of the long pier.

Pray for hope and better days.

3- He sat with the sad girl and he told her, on the Port Austin pier.

Jigsaw puzzles, we will become.

The remainder pieces seeking to be part of someone.

We must pray for peace and tell the night. Give me more.

4- She was a Michigan beauty with eyes of coffee brown.

She would dance for me in the early morning nude with the windows wide open.

She would tell me, our roses are blooming this morning.

Please come to my garden dear Johnnie. You have become part of my garden.

Coyote

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[M.E.Lyle]

It's hard to think of peace and tranquility these days. With so many darkness going on around us, it's hard to see the light.
Sometimes I enjoy going out on a dark clear night and look up at the stars. I point at certain ones and call them by their names. This gives me peace. The dark skies are getting lighter now with the city moving farther and farther out. Soon the stars will be gone.
A wonderful write. It made me think of better times.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading. I appreciate the comment.

[red93]

Excellent Work again Coyote about another of yr Enchantresses. Beautiful Women make the World go round ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. Beautiful people make the world smile. We need to be a beautiful person. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[John the Baptist]

I can think of a lot worse situations than being in such a garden. Having a nude woman dance for you in the early morning sounds like the perfect way to start the day. Even beats that first cup of Starbucks House Blend.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. I need a warm day and my garden. the days of nude woman are myth and tale now. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Betty Hermelee]

A lovely tale John, but what got me was the jigsaw puzzle, which may portend death, as we become little pieces... but until then let's sit on the pier and make love....and of course dance....and "pray for hope and better days"... your poetry is so smooth and romantic, but always with a tinge of sadness...
Thanks for sharing John.
Best, B

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Betty. it seems, we learn a -bit of sadness. Even in the good days.

[Betty Hermelee]

Absolutely.... keep swaying to that love poetry John, just really like it!
Best, B

[Dennis Wolf]

I've especially loved the tidbit with the jigsaw puzzles.

Never thought of using that in a piece like this, but it works all the same.

Cheers

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dennis Wolf. I learn in my Army days. We are jigsaw puzzles. Pieces lost and sometimes. Never to be found.

[Dennis Wolf]

Well, it makes sense in a way.
Cheers

[AYVID N]

You had some very breathtaking moments and people in your life. So many beautiful roses. Each flower was so special and brought you its own signature of joy. Beautifully penned, dear Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Divya for reading and the kind words. I have my grandfather English roses in my yard. They bloom in the spring. Reminding me of his garden.

[AYVID N]

Gardens with big roses are just a beautiful dream for me. You are always welcome, my friend.