The lover(A soldier prayer.)

When men and women are away fighting war. They need memories.

The Lover, A Soldier prayer.

A Poem by Coyote Poetry

 Soldier goes off to War. Need kind and sweet memories to keep them human. 

                     The Lover (A soldier prayer)
 
Poor boys and men.
Roads lead to War.

 
Young woman with a  sweet smile.
Silk dress.
Smelling like the Spring wildflowers.

 
She whispered to her soldier.

“Let’s dance tonight.
You shall go to War. 
tonight we need to create photos for the heart. 
Memories to keep you warm when you are lonely and afraid.”

 
Young man brought his sweet Angel close.
Whispered kind words of love and thankfulness.

 
Soldier stand alone.
Cleans his M-16A2.
Death is all around him.

 
He closes his eyes and
he remembered.
The smell of the wildflowers on her skin,
the feel of her silk dress.

 
The sweet smile of his love.

 
Keeps him human.

 
                  John Castellenas
                  4 April 2009

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[softlyfall]

Agelessly romantic images in thus wonderful poem, and the memory of the scent of flowers is perfect to describe the power of the feminine divine to nourish and comfort. I try to imagine being a soldier. I am not certain I have the right kind of courage. I would have to be angry to fight. Blame my berserker ancestors ( I blame them for tons of stuff lol)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to have Berserker blood. Sometimes needed to protect the family. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Memories make us strong and they also bring us home.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Frederick. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Melinda McQueen]

It helps to have sweet memories when going through trials.
It helps you get through.
Did you go to war?
Nicely penned.
MMR

[Coyote Poetry]

I did dear Melinda. I remember my sister two friend gave me their high school photo and they told me. Look at the photos and remember we love you. War teaches young men and women. Every moment we have. A gift. Thank you dear Melinda for reading and the comment.

[Melinda McQueen]

Very true, Coyote.

[Betty Hermelee]

A heartfelt poem; saying good bye is painful, especially to your love, a young woman who smells like spring flowers... Taking photos for remembrance, while both are far away from each other. even in was, he sees her in his mind's eye, those sweet flowers... which for a fleeting moment allow him to smile.
Lovely write John, as usual....
Best, B

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Betty. We need memories and we need photos. Once I found a dying soldiers. He told me. Take the photos out of my pocket. The photos were of wife and his children. He held them and he told me. Please tell them. I loved them.

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome dear John!!!
Best, B

[John the Baptist]

But that all soldiers could have such memories to take to war with them. Surrounded by death, nothing else can keep one sane.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree John. Thank you for reading and the comment. Soldiers need something to go home to.