Love should be given freely. We need to make love with the lights on and we need to sing the songs of love to the moon, to the sun.
Please stay with me, till the world ends dear lover.
I called your name and I asked the moon. Please one more kiss, please one more dance with the most beautiful lady in my world. The moon listened, the stars pay attention and the kind night brought you to me. And I kissed you softly and we danced for the Pacific ocean.
O' memory, blessed and a tangle web of a tragic dance. You and me. We are Winter and Summer. I told you. Please stay with me, till the world ends dear Kelly.
I am the moon and you are the sun. Needing a eclipse of two hearts and we create a celestial sea of emotion where we must steal second, we must steal minutes.
Dear Kelly, your skin of lily white and eyes of the wild sea. Make me know madness. We must dance in the shadow of love and we know the folly of our deeds.
I have written a million words of poesy for you and I aspire to see your face in the night. I remembered, we prayed and we laughed. And we cried. I need your coy smile and your lasting words.
I have loved you for a thousand days and I will love you till the sun and the moon can meet.
Forget-me-not word-man told the midnight sky. We may kiss and we may part. On night when the moon is full and everyone is asleep. We will love with gladness and I will steal a thousand kisses.
I am here by the sea with you tonight and I prayed to Eros. Please allow my damsel of light, my damsel of kindness. My beautiful sea flower who dances with the dangerous sea. Please stay with me, till the ends of days.
Beautiful Kelly whispered. I am here and please make this night last forever. I want us to fall into nuptial embrace and let's create a lullaby where love can win.
I brought her closer and I whispered. We will write a lullaby into the sky. Where love could win.
Holy cow! What an expression of love. Have two people ever loved as much? I think perhaps most of us have and we remember the burning desire to embrace one another until the end of time. Love is a wonderful thing. I think in the sentence, "Needing a eclipse," you should have, "Needing an eclipse." That's about it, the rest is perfectomundo.
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Thank you my friend and I agree. We need a few eclipse in a lifetime.
"I called your name and I asked the moon." Please one more kiss"
If that's not romance then I'm not sure what is. Your writing is a blanket of warmth for the soul. Enjoyed this very much.
I could feel the heartbeat in this, the desire, the want and especially the love. When we have someone in our lives that makes us feel this way, there is no better feeling. It is as if each day is a gift and yesterday the perfect memory. It is almost unexplainable but your words, your poetry does just that. Beautiful work.
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Thank you my friend. I am a old man now. I learn. We need a kind woman near and children at our feet.. read moreThank you my friend. I am a old man now. I learn. We need a kind woman near and children at our feet.
Holy cow! What an expression of love. Have two people ever loved as much? I think perhaps most of us have and we remember the burning desire to embrace one another until the end of time. Love is a wonderful thing. I think in the sentence, "Needing a eclipse," you should have, "Needing an eclipse." That's about it, the rest is perfectomundo.
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Thank you my friend and I agree. We need a few eclipse in a lifetime.
Two opposites attract...you and Kelly the moon and the sun.... your thousand days may even be more...a lovely tale of love and spirituality....and lasting passion...but where is the whiskey toast??? great poem John.
Best, B.
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The whiskey toast would be later dear Betty and thank you for reading and the comment.
What a lovely homage to someone dear. It is beautiful to think something like this exists out there, and I am glad you found it. Methinks you are a hopeless romantic, dear friend!
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I am and I am looking for the hopeless romantic. Thank you, dear Zoe, for reading and the comment.
love the intensity of this and the certainty of how you feel. It takes you higher with the descriptions you share - makes one want to reach for it as well. Thank you for this write!
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Hello dear Elaine. All of us need reminders. Love can still be sweet. Thank you for reading and the .. read moreHello dear Elaine. All of us need reminders. Love can still be sweet. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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