Unknown soldiers.

Unknown soldiers.

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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April poetry number nineteen...

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Unknown soldiers.,..
He wrote to his journal in a Soldier graveyard in France outside of Paris in 1979. The dead don't suffer no-more. He is surrounded by 40,000 crosses with names of boys and men who will not return home. He burn the white sage in the place of the unknown soldiers. He lay his small tee-pee on the grass and put the burning sage into the hole in the tee-pee.
He watches the smoke rises to the sky and he prayed. Soldiers have a place to rest, soldiers have a place to know peace. He felt great sadness. He knew mamas, wives and children are waiting still. When a soldier doesn't return home. Someone is waiting.
He wondered, if God is kinder to the unknown soldiers? Men and women, nameless and not forgotten. He walked the long lines of white crosses with no names, just dates and their war.
He wonder if the dead could talk. What would they say? Soldiers fight, soldiers die. Left, right. Left, right. Above face. One shot, one kill. I remember you my lost friends.
Coyote

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Most soldiers alive today volunteered to serve. There are intrinsic job hazards to being a soldier, i.e., being shot at and being forced to shoot back. They tell the youth to sign up and fight for "freedom" but the greatest threat to American freedom resides in Washington D.C., not in Afghanistan or Iraq. They call the fallen "heroes" who willingly signed up for a job they were paid to do. If a tree falls on a logger they don't call him a "hero" when he dies. They call that a "tragedy". I understand the compassion for those who are drafted and elected into a conflict they did not choose, yet. serve bravely, despite their moral, political or religious objections. I could almost call them "heroes". On the other hand, those who join to serve and accept pay for their service; who knowingly enter a profession of killing and dying despite the obvious dangers, I believe to be no more heroes than the logger when the tree he was cutting fell on him. They are victims of an occupational hazard, not "heroes". My opinion may be an unpopular one but it is an honest evaluation of seeing through the bureaucratic shuck and jive made so popular by politicians who sit in cushy offices while others do their fighting and dying for them.

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Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Sometimes we must fight. Ukraine and many places are being attacked. Run or fight. Where do you run .. read more
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(Soldiers fight, soldiers die. Left, right. Left, right. Above face. One shot, one kill. I remember you my lost friends.) I am weeping as I read these words. And I will remember those we have lost. ~Sharon

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Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear Sharon. The wars keep stealing from us my friend.
Knowing that you have served makes this write all the more poignant, John.

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Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Ken. I appreciate the comment.
Most soldiers alive today volunteered to serve. There are intrinsic job hazards to being a soldier, i.e., being shot at and being forced to shoot back. They tell the youth to sign up and fight for "freedom" but the greatest threat to American freedom resides in Washington D.C., not in Afghanistan or Iraq. They call the fallen "heroes" who willingly signed up for a job they were paid to do. If a tree falls on a logger they don't call him a "hero" when he dies. They call that a "tragedy". I understand the compassion for those who are drafted and elected into a conflict they did not choose, yet. serve bravely, despite their moral, political or religious objections. I could almost call them "heroes". On the other hand, those who join to serve and accept pay for their service; who knowingly enter a profession of killing and dying despite the obvious dangers, I believe to be no more heroes than the logger when the tree he was cutting fell on him. They are victims of an occupational hazard, not "heroes". My opinion may be an unpopular one but it is an honest evaluation of seeing through the bureaucratic shuck and jive made so popular by politicians who sit in cushy offices while others do their fighting and dying for them.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Sometimes we must fight. Ukraine and many places are being attacked. Run or fight. Where do you run .. read more
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Fabian G. Franklin

2 Years Ago

But they aren't dying for freedom or home, which is my point. They are dying for some politician's f.. read more
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Gee
Across the world cemeteries like the one you describe exist, man will never learn.
There is sadness and resignation in your well written words.
Good morning

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Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Good morning dear Gee. WW2 was suppose to be the last war. Thank you for reading and the comment.
This is a sad piece. Melancholic and in some ways dark yet in others peaceful and a tribute. Well written Coyote

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Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

The graveyard outside of Paris. Well-kept. They showed respect for the soldiers. Thank you for readi.. read more


I believe I may have visited the same cemetery Coyote .. I have visited so many throughout France & Belgium over the years and regularly made an annual pilgrimage until Covid hit .. your post above is a fine testament and tribute to so many fallen souls .................... an outstanding poem with a real autobiographical feel ....... respect sir and much of it .. Neville


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Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Neville. The soldiers graveyards show us. Freedom isn't free.
Red Poppies in our 💜 Heart… thank you for your Service…. Rest In Peace… Never forgotten… Amen …. 🌺 Pat

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Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I agree dear Pat. We must remember them. Thank you for reading and the comment.
war is a three letter word

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Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I agree Dave.
Few places have more soldier graves than France, and many of those graves belong to Americans. And you're right, the suffering belongs not only to the dead, but also to those who cared for them. And even as I write, soldier graves are being dug in Ukraine. Makes me think of the words of the old '60's song, "When will they ever learn?"

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Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

"When will they ever learn?", I agree my friend. I hope men can seek peace over war. But I don't bel.. read more
This was great to read. Very sad. Enjoyed very much.

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Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear Cheyenne. I appreciate the comment.

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