Great love, never died. When love is alive. The love will grow to become a willow tree. Flowing and dancing with the free wind. Expanding to forever.
I need you now...
What shall I remember my lady midnight? My exquisite beauty, you made me believe love was sweet, love was everything, we need. Till I fell into your eyes of hazel, I masqueraded with the affliction of loneliness.
Now I can see the sea in your eyes, now I can see a colorful world. I love your morning face, when you drink your coffee and you watch the morning come alive. You love the silence of the morning and the song of the singing birds. I write my morning poetry and I am humble by your kindness.
I love coming home to you. You love your nudity and you wait for the night and me to return by the open window. I bring your wine to you and you embrace me, giving me so many sweet kisses. I tell you, I need you now, I need you forever. You give me the most beautiful smile and you tell me with mischief in your eyes. I want a bubble bath, a glass of good wine and some song. You will read poetry to me by the bathtub. I want my promised long massage and the fragrance of love will overtake us. Make us believe. We are safe and sound.
I told my mystic beauty. My lofty mind, my lofty thoughts believe you are my miracle. My softest touch and I love you so. Pretty Brigid smiled and she told me. I love you more.
Cotote, you are getting better each time I read you. The addition of photos to accompany the words adds so much more to the poem. This is splendid to read and take in. The character's love and admiration makes the poem something that sticks in the mind long after reading the poem.
Excellent writing, my friend. :)
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3 Years Ago
Thank you, my friend. I appreciate the kind words.
Relic stole my words .............. this could very easily be your absolute forte my brother .. the unique use of photographic images between stanzas is impressive & should form part of your poetic signature Johnnie C
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3 Years Ago
Thank you, Neville. Beautiful photos make the mind wander.
3 Years Ago
Ha .. mine wandered that far, I am beginning to wonder when I shall find it again ... write.. read more
Ha .. mine wandered that far, I am beginning to wonder when I shall find it again ... write on brother ...................... Neville
Cotote, you are getting better each time I read you. The addition of photos to accompany the words adds so much more to the poem. This is splendid to read and take in. The character's love and admiration makes the poem something that sticks in the mind long after reading the poem.
Excellent writing, my friend. :)
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thank you, my friend. I appreciate the kind words.
Oh gosh... where to begin..
Shall I begin with the perfect art work??? which I know takes quite awhile to find, just the perfect ones..or.
shall I plunge, knee deep into the words..
Tra la..Tra la..
Men, men, men... youth, youth, youth.. and then of course love, love ,love..
finding the right one.. not easy.. This I know.....
But it can happen and almost always will if ones heart stays open..
Lisa
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3 Years Ago
Thank you dear Lisa. When love is near. Our heart and mind will know joy.
3 Years Ago
Oh boy do I ever agree..
I was oh so lucky to find just the right one..
I love the line: I fell into your eyes of hazel! This is so beautifully written! The reader can't but feel the romance and love as they read! I know I did!
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3 Years Ago
Thank you, dear friend, for reading and the comment. Being in love, our best days.
Said it before, say it again. Ladies man! Lol! Reminds me of a sailor. A girl in every port.
Me? I spent much of my youth wandering alone. Oh,there were girls. But not many. And nothing really infinite. We shared a cup of tea and then I moved on. But you? Well, might be you're a better man than me. Nicely written, Sir.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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