Goodbye my lover

September poetry number nine.

Goodbye my lover....

1---Goodbye my lover,

maybe our last kiss, maybe our last words.

Did we abandoned love or did time steal our wishes.....

2---- Eleanor, sweet name upon my lips.

Once we seduced the sun and we adored love.

Who allowed us to forget love? I didn't forget you my lady of midnight...

3--- She told me, please give me another sweet lie.

I need your eloquence words to awake my sleeping heart.

Even the liar's prayers is okay when we forgot love....

4--- We savored love, we loved to feast on kisses and kind words.

I knew. Love is like a warm perfect sunny day, each one a wonder and a miracle.

You knew we were just dreamer with butterfly wishes. I love you Eleanor.

Coyote

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[K writes]

3--- She told me, please give me another sweet lie.
I need your eloquence words to awake my sleeping heart.
Even the liar's prayers is okay when we forgot love....

LOVE these lines here, this is wonderful

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you KayKey. I appreciate the comment dear poet.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Hi John, this is beautiful, I also love the song.
I do hope you are well over there
Juliex.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Julie. All is okay.

[Fran Marie]

a nice declaration of love even
sweet lies awake her sleeping heart
dreamers with butterfly wishes always
feel the love ..nicely expressed poem

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Fran. A taste of love, better than to never know.

[Savannah Gossett]

This is an amazing piece!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Savannah for reading and the comment. I appreciate the kind words.

[Kerra]

Love this write, this is really wonderful

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Kerra for reading and the comment.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

"we loved to feast on kisses and kind words." Encapsulates the tender moments of love. Another wonderful piece of poetry CP. Thank you for sharing your work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Carlos for reading and the comment. I appreciate my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"Eleanor, gee I think you're swell and you really do me well" ( Turtles)

Love this piece....and I have found in my life time that most often it is that "time does steal our wishes" rather than us abandoning love.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right Eric. Thank you for reading and the comment. Time steals our wishes.